Comment from Stephanie Rollins

Excellent

How interesting! It made me go hmmmm.... Unexpected twist. It made me think of my 6-year-old. It is definitely something he would do. Great job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Stephanie, for your feedback and the good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kind regards, Debra :)

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a good read. I liked the flow of it and it grabbed my attention from the beginning. I think you have an original and creative entry for the contest. Good job.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Chas, for your feedback and the good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kind regards, Debra :)

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Contest Author,

Ha ha ha! This sounds like something a cat might think or say. LOL

Nothing to suggest revising.

Good luck and thanks for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Jan, for your feedback and the good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kind regards, Debra :)