Down In Front!
A Kyrielle for Animal Crackers Club24 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is hilarious! What a cute picture and something I might see at my daughters place now. You have written a jaunty Kyrielle here Yvonne. The presentation is very pleasant as well. Well done my friend. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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This is hilarious! What a cute picture and something I might see at my daughters place now. You have written a jaunty Kyrielle here Yvonne. The presentation is very pleasant as well. Well done my friend. Nancy:)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you. I'm so happy you like it.
Comment from Ross E Silke
This is so delightful, adorable, and fun to read and visualize! It's charming and cute. The idea is quite original and creative. The picture matches perfectly to hook the reader and draw them in! Humorous yet truthful as these little friends are probably more interested than the human company to come, lol. I like the idea of them asking to move their heads out of the way to be able to see the food items. The poem is written well, presented clearly in style, structure, and presentation. A memorable read! Best,
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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This is so delightful, adorable, and fun to read and visualize! It's charming and cute. The idea is quite original and creative. The picture matches perfectly to hook the reader and draw them in! Humorous yet truthful as these little friends are probably more interested than the human company to come, lol. I like the idea of them asking to move their heads out of the way to be able to see the food items. The poem is written well, presented clearly in style, structure, and presentation. A memorable read! Best,
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this great review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Damommy - this is such a cute poem and is perfect in construction. Good abab rhyme and the repeated lines fall seamlessly into place and do not sound contrived. I love the picture - I'm wondering which came first, that or the words LOL. Very well done. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Hi Damommy - this is such a cute poem and is perfect in construction. Good abab rhyme and the repeated lines fall seamlessly into place and do not sound contrived. I love the picture - I'm wondering which came first, that or the words LOL. Very well done. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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I must confess, the picture came first. I couldn't resist it. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle about the animals looking through the window trying to see what is going on inside there but all they can see is the back of the man's head.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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A very well-written Kyrielle about the animals looking through the window trying to see what is going on inside there but all they can see is the back of the man's head.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Poor little guys. They want to see the TV. lol. Thanks, Sandra.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Yvonne. I love this. What a great job you've done. Your Kyrielle just flows along perfectly and I love the image. Makes me feel bad for the cute pet, though, who want to get in. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Hi Yvonne. I love this. What a great job you've done. Your Kyrielle just flows along perfectly and I love the image. Makes me feel bad for the cute pet, though, who want to get in. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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I know. They want to watch TV, too, and have snacks. Thanks for reviewing, Mariliyn
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! I started giggling just as soon as the pic appeared as I scrolled down, but the poem makes it all the more funny! :) ;) PERFECT use of the Kyrielle with a 'last line' repeat ... but I have to ask: is this a personal picture of your critters? They are so funny!! :) :) Thank you for sharing that much-needed comic relief enhanced with your talented pen! :) :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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LOL! I started giggling just as soon as the pic appeared as I scrolled down, but the poem makes it all the more funny! :) ;) PERFECT use of the Kyrielle with a 'last line' repeat ... but I have to ask: is this a personal picture of your critters? They are so funny!! :) :) Thank you for sharing that much-needed comic relief enhanced with your talented pen! :) :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review. No, there aren't my pets. I wish they were because I'd let them in. lol. My pets are indoor people. I found this picture and couldn't resist it.
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem and that picture had me giggling throughout the reading. It's so precious and yes, that is exactly what it looks like the cat, dog and chickens are saying.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Your poem and that picture had me giggling throughout the reading. It's so precious and yes, that is exactly what it looks like the cat, dog and chickens are saying.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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I'm glad you giggled. Thanks for reviewing. My own pets are inside watching TV and snacking. lol
Comment from judiverse
This is great. I love the picture of the animals looking in. Their thoughts about food are always foremost, so if they see some food, I'm sure they'd want to get some. There's also the natural curiosity animals have. They want to know what's going on, and they would be intrigued by what might be going on inside. Rather cheeky of them in that repeating line, "You block our view. Please move your head." Excellent insights from the animal world! judi
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This is great. I love the picture of the animals looking in. Their thoughts about food are always foremost, so if they see some food, I'm sure they'd want to get some. There's also the natural curiosity animals have. They want to know what's going on, and they would be intrigued by what might be going on inside. Rather cheeky of them in that repeating line, "You block our view. Please move your head." Excellent insights from the animal world! judi
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for a delightful review.
Comment from 24chas
This was a fun read, damommy. I liked the flow of it and the rhyme scheme made the read smooth and easy. The picture definitely made the presentation. Good job.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This was a fun read, damommy. I liked the flow of it and the rhyme scheme made the read smooth and easy. The picture definitely made the presentation. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, don't you just hate it when you can't see what is going on because someone is blocking the view?
This is a very fun poem, Yvonne. And that menagerie seems to want in.
Excellent Kyrielle and superb metre and rhyme.
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Ha, don't you just hate it when you can't see what is going on because someone is blocking the view?
This is a very fun poem, Yvonne. And that menagerie seems to want in.
Excellent Kyrielle and superb metre and rhyme.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you. I found the picture first and just had to use it.
