Down In Front!
A Kyrielle for Animal Crackers Club24 total reviews
Comment from Anne B Francis
Oh this made me laugh, even the picture itself before even starting to read, go on let them in they look so cute and they seem to be behaving quite well - or at least move your head.
Very clever loved my read.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Oh this made me laugh, even the picture itself before even starting to read, go on let them in they look so cute and they seem to be behaving quite well - or at least move your head.
Very clever loved my read.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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I'd probably let them in. Poor little things. I hate it when animals look in the door, and I know I can't keep them all. I'm so happy it made you laugh, and thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading this funny Kyrielle, Yvonne. The photograph that sets this up is hilarious and perfect for the lead in. You have done a good job on the execution of this form and funny repetitive line.
Melissa
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed reading this funny Kyrielle, Yvonne. The photograph that sets this up is hilarious and perfect for the lead in. You have done a good job on the execution of this form and funny repetitive line.
Melissa
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You've done it well. The picture says it all and then the poem supports the picture. We wonder what they might do if indeed they are allowed in the share in the feast. Good poetry. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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You've done it well. The picture says it all and then the poem supports the picture. We wonder what they might do if indeed they are allowed in the share in the feast. Good poetry. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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They'd probably eat it all up! And take the best chairs. lol. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You did well with this one too, Yvonne. The picture had me chuckling and your Kyrielle kept me smiling. Perfect pair this poem and pic.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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You did well with this one too, Yvonne. The picture had me chuckling and your Kyrielle kept me smiling. Perfect pair this poem and pic.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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I'm glad I made you smile. Thank you so much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a perfect style you chose to tell this story of the little animals. The picture is sooo darling. Please let them in. They wish to be near you as all watch tv. You did a great job, Yvonne, with your Animal Crackers Club poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your words flow smoothly and I could picture each one speaking. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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What a perfect style you chose to tell this story of the little animals. The picture is sooo darling. Please let them in. They wish to be near you as all watch tv. You did a great job, Yvonne, with your Animal Crackers Club poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your words flow smoothly and I could picture each one speaking. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you for these wonderful comments and the stars! 8-)
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Yvonne, this is just so sweet. So they look in through the window and they just long for all the lovely snacks they see in there. I love it.
I've signed up for this challenge. I hope it can be a short story as well? All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Awe, Yvonne, this is just so sweet. So they look in through the window and they just long for all the lovely snacks they see in there. I love it.
I've signed up for this challenge. I hope it can be a short story as well? All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Yes, it can be prose or poetry. It makes me designate one or the other on the page, but we're very relaxed in this club. Looking forward to reading yours. Thank you for the review.
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Great, I'll be writing a little story.Ulla:)))
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Damommy;
>"Snacks and sacks!" I just love it! Ha, ha, & Chuckle!
> I like how you reenacted a well ingeniously imaginative scene who hit all of the characters looking younger with the hope of pushing in to get a view.
I>The interaction is pricelessly Documented in this novel of a scripted drama.
>Thanks so much and take care and have a good one my friend.
Alx
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Cheers, Damommy;
>"Snacks and sacks!" I just love it! Ha, ha, & Chuckle!
> I like how you reenacted a well ingeniously imaginative scene who hit all of the characters looking younger with the hope of pushing in to get a view.
I>The interaction is pricelessly Documented in this novel of a scripted drama.
>Thanks so much and take care and have a good one my friend.
Alx
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this great review.
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You're very welcome, Damommy.
Alx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Cute image and
nice presentation.
-You could say they
are a motley crew!
-Notes are appreciated.
-A cute poem to go with
the image- the repeating
line is good, too.
-I also like the lines
about "fur and feathers"
and the snacks.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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-Cute image and
nice presentation.
-You could say they
are a motley crew!
-Notes are appreciated.
-A cute poem to go with
the image- the repeating
line is good, too.
-I also like the lines
about "fur and feathers"
and the snacks.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank YOU for reviewing. I'm glad you liked those lines, too.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Pantygynt
At last! A picture of the comittee that judges those site contests on FanStory. They thought they were anonymous, but now we know there isn't a mouse between them. They're just 'two chicken' to come out into the open and 'dogged' by having a poor view of the subject being judged. What a 'CATastrophe!'
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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At last! A picture of the comittee that judges those site contests on FanStory. They thought they were anonymous, but now we know there isn't a mouse between them. They're just 'two chicken' to come out into the open and 'dogged' by having a poor view of the subject being judged. What a 'CATastrophe!'
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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LOL. You may be right. Love your play on words.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Bravo! I really like this, especially this line:
Or maybe bring us snacks in sacks. LOL!
Pets are all the same--they want our food. And our chairs, or laps. I can just see them all snuggled on me munching my snacks. Nothing better! That's why we keep the little darlings. :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Bravo! I really like this, especially this line:
Or maybe bring us snacks in sacks. LOL!
Pets are all the same--they want our food. And our chairs, or laps. I can just see them all snuggled on me munching my snacks. Nothing better! That's why we keep the little darlings. :)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Isn't that the truth? Mine are all inside pets, of course, and I look like a mound of fur most of the time. But I wouldn't take a million dollars for them. I'm so happy you like this. Thank you for the beautiful review, Phyllis, and stars!
