Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This Whitney, Dance Me, has the proper formatting and brings the full-impact of a devoted relationship to a place where pies are baked, gizzards are cooked, dishes washed, and love enjoyed.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2019

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Bill. Kind regards, Debra :)

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I can just imagine her reciting this as she leans back in his arms, eyelashes a'flutter! The mono-rhyme addition to your Whitney adds just the right sense of overblown drama!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

LOL! Thank you so much Tony, I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-I like the image, Debra.
-I also like the Whitney form.
-You have written a very good
one with the addition of rhyme.
-Your poem flows well with
good imagery.
-I like the ending line, too.
-Good luck with NaPoWriMo.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Pam, for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Apr-2019

You are very welcome, Debra.

Comment from RichardFann

Exceptional

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Hi Debs,

Like the romance of this,
which pops up at the most unexpected moment.

Like the pic. My creative writing tutor is a collector of 1920s and 1930s clothes, so she would love the style of this.

Thanks,

Richard

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Hi Richard :) Thanks again for your fab 6* review. I really appreciate it :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

The kitchen floor indeed! That line made me laugh. But at least they are still in love...
Your title reminded me of a Leonard Cohen song. I think it was called Dance Me To The End Of Love.
Thanks for sharing another lovely poem.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thanks for your great feedback, Maria :) Glad you enjoyed the poem! Best wishes, Debra

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

LUV this. Image and poem together make a great post. The looks on these faces and the stance! Yes, let's dance across the floor forevermore. Good rhyming and theme in this clever poem. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Marilyn :) I always appreciate your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Debra,

Oh, this is a lovely, lively poem with a musical quality to it that one could almost dance to. Very nicely written with nothing for me to suggest you consider reworking. Thanks for a delightful read. Jan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thank you, Jan, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

We've danced in the kitchen and lounge before today too. Another great Whitney. Are they meant to rhyme? I like the ones that do. I'm the old-fashioned type. :)

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Me too, Judy!
Thank you so much for your feedback. I'm not sure if whitneys are meant to rhyme or not (but mine do!)
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

This one is fabulous, too. (I have never heard of a Whitney until now! Thank you for making me smarter today. And I absolutely LOVE the flow of this cadence.) And, of course, how could I not love this photo!! Great job, Debra! Three for three!! Keep 'em coming! xo

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thanks so much, Rachelle :)
I'm glad you enjoyed this one - it seemed to take me ages to get the rhythm how I wanted it (even with limited syllables!)
Best wishes as always, Debra x

reply by Rachelle Allen on 02-Apr-2019

I bet with each one it will get easier! And anyway, it's not the work; it's the RESULTS! And yours were wonderful! xo

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

Loved the poem and it rhymes so well. You did an excellent job and I enjoyed reading it. The picture sets it off perfectly. Have a great evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Shirley :) You too! Best wishes, Debra :)