Comment from RichardFann

Exceptional

Debs,

Congratulations on entering this once-a-day challenge.

I once worked in Whitney on an audit job.

For some reason, an attractive young auditor insisted on coming with me.

But I was too bashful (at that time) to make the most of it!


Re this comp, good luck.

Thanks,

Richard.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Aw, thanks Richard :)
I appreciate the 6 stars and the good luck wishes.
Bless the bashful younger you!
Debs :)

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi again, Debra,

This is a delightful poem, my friend. Goals are important to keep in mind to ensure we reach our destination. Nothing to suggest revising in this piece. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Jan, for your feedback. Always appreciated. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

LOL so true. Excellently done whitney, rhyme and flow are spot on and the wish for all of us to be able to keep it up for a month. Very nicely done, keep going

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Barb :) I appreciate your lovely feedback as always, Best wishes, Debra

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I do hope for you that you can make it through to the end in spite of being short on time. Many blessings for the month of writing.
Patricia

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Patricia. I will do my best! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

And the road goes on and on and on. You make these sound so easy! I'm sure you'll make it through April. Only 28 days to go! I'll be watching out for these and cheering you on. :)

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Judy :) I appreciate your kind encouragement! Best wishes, Debra:)

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Well, this is a great start. I love your first poem. It sounds great when read aloud. Good luck with the challenge. I'll be reading you.
Just learned what a whitney is.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thanks so much, Maria! Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno

Excellent

And... your off to a flying start! Keep that rhyme, meter and syllable count flowing for April and I hope you have a splendid time creating something everyday in April! I'll certainly look forward to it if this one is anything to go by, freeflowing superbly rhymed and whips a whitney in to shape!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thanks so much, Dale :) I appreciate your encouragement! Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

This will be nice :) A rhymed Whitney a day in the month of April will be a pleasure to read. I am particiating too. It's always a fun challenge. I just pray for no unexpected obstacles to keep me from posting every day.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Hi Joy :) I trust that you will be able to complete your challenge also...you have so much to inspire you, I don't see it being much of a problem! Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

That would be awesome if you posted a Whitney every day. You started off with a great one ...it says precisely what you mean to do. And with kids still at home you will have plenty of ammo.
God bless

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thank you so much kiwijenny! I appreciate your warm and encouraging feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Well writers block certained unblocked your pen here Debra as you rose to the challenge and penned a poem for this years NaProWriMo Contest, a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Dolly. I appreciate your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)