Take My Hand
A Loop Poem Entry10 total reviews
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Very sweet romance loop poem. Congratulations on the contest win. No edits or adjustments needed. Holding hands photo is very complimentary too.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
Very sweet romance loop poem. Congratulations on the contest win. No edits or adjustments needed. Holding hands photo is very complimentary too.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Mastery
I wish you the best, Author. This is a very deserving write. I like the feelings you eminanate within the framework of this piece like
"Molehills never amount to much
Much ado about nothing ruins"
Good Luck, Bob
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
I wish you the best, Author. This is a very deserving write. I like the feelings you eminanate within the framework of this piece like
"Molehills never amount to much
Much ado about nothing ruins"
Good Luck, Bob
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your insights.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
How beautiful, and it had such a natural, unforced flow.
I really like the font style and size;
I love the message within the poem;
I love the celebration within the poem;
Perfect artwork;
Perfect title.
Perfect contest entry :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
How beautiful, and it had such a natural, unforced flow.
I really like the font style and size;
I love the message within the poem;
I love the celebration within the poem;
Perfect artwork;
Perfect title.
Perfect contest entry :)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written loop poem about the lifetime marriage of fifty years and the couple seem to be willing to take it on for another fifty years that seems to be just enough for these love birds.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
A very well-written loop poem about the lifetime marriage of fifty years and the couple seem to be willing to take it on for another fifty years that seems to be just enough for these love birds.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
This is a fantastic loop poem, Mystery Writer. I love that after all the looping it looped back to referencing 50 years. This is clever and creative.
I wish you best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
This is a fantastic loop poem, Mystery Writer. I love that after all the looping it looped back to referencing 50 years. This is clever and creative.
I wish you best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback and encouraging comments.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Thank a delightful loop and congratulations on your 50 years together! Mountains you have climbed and the happiness you have shared, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
Thank a delightful loop and congratulations on your 50 years together! Mountains you have climbed and the happiness you have shared, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging comments!
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Uplifting, very expressive and joy-filled write. A tribute to a lasting, loving relationship. I like how you build up your lines, each succeeding unfolds more of the binding link: love!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
Uplifting, very expressive and joy-filled write. A tribute to a lasting, loving relationship. I like how you build up your lines, each succeeding unfolds more of the binding link: love!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I enjoyed you excellent Loop Poem contest entry. Congratulations on your 50 years and future! I also enjoyed your photograph and its meaning.
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
Dear Author,
I enjoyed you excellent Loop Poem contest entry. Congratulations on your 50 years and future! I also enjoyed your photograph and its meaning.
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and share your sentiments!
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My pleasure
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Aaawwww, this is such a sweet loop poem and a super contest entry. I think you have penned a winner, my friend. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
Hi Contest Author,
Aaawwww, this is such a sweet loop poem and a super contest entry. I think you have penned a winner, my friend. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. It had a good flow to it and I think the form of loop poetry really enhanced this piece. Congrats on the fifty years, and I hope you have many more.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
This was a good read. It had a good flow to it and I think the form of loop poetry really enhanced this piece. Congrats on the fifty years, and I hope you have many more.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and share your sentiments!