Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hi Roxanna,

My dogs might pray about getting her favorite treat, but they aren't too concerned about smog. That is a cute picture, and it is fun to imagine what a dog might pray about.

- "From the monster (whos) name is Smog?" - whose

Joy xx

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thanks so much Joy. Rox

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was really cool, Roxanna. The prayer had a good flow to it and it figures that a dog would pray for others first. We could learn a lesson from dogs about unconditional love.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thanks so much. Dogs are good people. =} Rox

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Roxanna,

This is an absolutely adorable poem. And the image you have chosen to display is perfect to complement your verse effectively.

A crime what is being allowed to oyr beautiful planet.

Thanks for pointing up environmental concerns.

Jan

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thanks so much Jan. Rox

Comment from Michele Harber

Excellent

This is very sweet, and I can easily see it being what an animal is thinking. It's filled with a lot of small, telling moments, like the dog being frightened by the "scary pine cones." This was good fun to read, Rox, and the rhymes work well.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thanks so much Michele. Rox

reply by Michele Harber on 01-Apr-2019

You're very welcome.

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

This heartfelt prayer could easily be attributed to an animal and in particular to a dog. I enjoyed it very much.

I picked up one spag:
From the monster who's name is Smog? - delete apostrophe from who's.

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thanks so much Judy. Rox

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your animal crackers poem, Rox. The picture is super. I like the rhyming couplets used to make the prayer. I like the way you made some of the verses 2, 1, or 3 lines. The 'things' the dog wishes to do but couldn't because of the fog were super. I could see the little dog doing each one of them. Thanks for sharing a great prayer from the little dog's POV. Jan

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thanks so much Jan. Rox