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Haiku and Senryu Suites

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Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites

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Comment from Gail Denham
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You have a great memory - of course I may have learned some of this in school - the combining of the colors, - but I don't remember them.
Your poem was very good - and certainly we thank the Lord for His promise to this world.
God is good for sure.
thanks for your interesting poem

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
    Thanks girl you continue to be a source of inspiration and fellowship for me here I really appreciate your comments.

    Blessings.,

    Brother Badger

    Darren
Comment from irishauthorme
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Remarkable. I did not suspect that you had such knowledge of the color spectrum, and your ability to explain the methodology for obtaining the different colors was so clear anyone reading could not only understand, but appreciate.
The verses from Genesis reminded me of the simple beauty of the rainbow, God's promise to us against the rising waters ending all life on earth. And, sometimes as I read the news, I wonder that God let's us continue in our ways that are against all the Bible and Jesus taught.
As I live to an age I thought i would never attain, I see that all Creation comes from God and that life, as we know it, is just part of an eternal cycle that continues after what we call death, the parting of the body and the soul.
More in an e-mail to you.
irish

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much for your uplifting and warm comments and generous review.
    Your comments are appreciated and I will make sure to send more detailed information about everything else later today
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Badger,

What a lovely write you have penned, my friend!

Only one teeny nit:

"blue and red -
whuch are by the ends"

I think you meant which.

Thanks for sharing about color theory. It is one course I regret never having taken.

Jan

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much for your warm review Jen and thanks so much for the help with the typos no matter how much I study I still miss one or two. Thanks so much your comments are appreciated.

    Blessings,

    Darren
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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You are very observant: "as you will notice, the secondary colors lie between their mix" I did not notice this. Now I need to look at the bow and really look at it. This will invite the reader to stop and notice to marvel at how balanced Mother Nature's art is. It just occurred to me we see so much human paintings of the rainbow that we forget Mother Nature painted it first. How cool.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
    Thanks Liz I really appreciate your comments and your review. Your comments are uplifting and appreciated and you have given me a greater view of how this comes across the other readers. Thanks again!

    Blessings,

    Darren
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a very cool collection of 5-7-5's you've used to define and detail and assign the importance of RAINBOWS! ;) ;) A really great and informative offering -- shows a lot of time and effort here, sir -- really paid off! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! :)

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much always a pleasure to meet New Riders here and pleasure and an honor to write with you here I appreciate your comments.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You have all the colours of the rainbow here in your uplifting write as nature delivers the weather and we sit back and watch, let's hope we don't have the same floods as Noah had to deal with, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
    I like your warm uplifting reviews, and I really appreciate your comments and review on my poem.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger
Comment from patcelaw
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There may be only one other promise in the Bible greater than the rainbow that God set in the heavens. And that promise to me would be the promise of eternal life when we trust in Christ.
Patricia

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
    Thank you so much for your warm comments and for fellowshipping with me here. Your comments and reviews really appreciated and May God continue to bless you bountifully.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger