Comment from Shirley McLain

Exceptional

I do love a good ghost story. I enjoyed this from beginning to end. You did a fine job and as far as I'm concerned you deserved the six. I hope you have a great evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you so much for the lovely 6 stars, Shirley, and the fabulous review. You are so kind. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. Lots of spooky things coming up soon. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

Another delightful chaptrer you have crafted here. A purely enjoyable read. And perfectly written.

Muttonhead. Ha ha ha! I love it.

One thing, and it may be just because I am reading on my android, but the word "I" is all alone next to the image, then lots of white space. The remainder of the sentence picks up under the image. If you see this too, just edit and add one line before the beginning of the text and it should move all the text under the image.

Thanks for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Hi Jan, I had a look but it all looks fine this side. But thank you for telling me, sometimes the FS Gremlin gets into the works and leaves lots of strange things around. :( I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part, thank you so much for the nice review. :) Sandra xx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

They're are mobilising into a more elaborate plan in which to expose the
'Venomous asp' in the admiralty building of all places, (how would Winston Churchill have fared with the loss of WW1?) of course he was Lord of the Admiralty in WW1,, so this is going to be interesting, mmmh, Tommy and Mildred. Well done Sandra, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you so much, Roy. I think Churchill is in for a bit of a surprise. :)) As for Tommy and Mildred.... we'll have to wait and see. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part, my friend. Big hugs. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by royowen on 01-Apr-2019

Well done

reply by royowen on 01-Apr-2019

I wonder if he wrote or in his memoirs, heh heh

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Sandra, so the plot thickens. Mildred has knack of getting out from an awkward situation, but at the same time getting Tommy to open up.That's interesting. But I can't wait to see what Veronica and Gladys have up their sleeves. As always I can't wait to be reading on. A big hug from a very wet Vall de Laguar. It's pelting down and has for the last 12 hours. We needed it so badly, though. Great writing. Ulla xxxx

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Sorry I'm so late, Ulla. I've got conjunctivitis and can't read very well. I'll catch up with your's as soon as I can. Thank you for the lovely 6 stars. I could see that shining through! Big hugs, my friend. xxx

reply by Ulla on 01-Apr-2019

I'm so sorry, Sandra. It must be very uncomfortable. I hope it clears up soon. Ullaxxx

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

I hope the three of them make that jerk's life a living hell, beat him to a pulp for everything he's done then send him to the nut house. Heck if they do it right he might go willingly saying something like Take me somewhere safe away from these ghosts. Lol. Have lots of witnesses too, colleges he admires, humiliate the heck out of him lol. Have the whole town laughing at him, Maybe have a little girl kick him in the privates that'd shrink his masculine attitude lol. That was a fun bit of revenge, but I'm sure you have something much better in mind. It was a fun read, look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend. I've come down with conjunctivitis and am having a job to read this, but got the gist! lol. Big hugs. Sandra xx

reply by Mistydawn on 01-Apr-2019

I'm sorry to here about your eye problems I hope it gets better soon.
I'm sure you can come up with something much better for Charles.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

You already know how much I enjoy reading your this story. You are doing another great job with it.

"In Churchill's office." (Oh my!! getting all official now. LOL

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you so much for the six stars, Barbara and lovely review. I can't see much at the moment, I have conjunctivitis, and my eyes are sticky and so sore. I'll read your next part as soon as I can. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xx

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

They are going to have such fun tormenting the Venomous Asp. Makes me wish I could be there with him. I wonder if Tommy and Mildred hit it off, if she might choose to stay behind. I hope not, but I don't want anyone to be hurt. Another great chapter, so good I'm not counting off for the commas. Assuming that I'm right about them. lol

injured, than God? (I think you could remove this comma . . . or not. 8-) )

serious situation, couldn't do any harm.
( and this comma)

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you for pointing those commas' out, Yvonne. I always managed to get some wrong. Leaving the ones I need, out, and the ones I don't, in! Lol. I'm sending you a ginormous hug for the 6 stars, my friend, thank you so very much. Lot's of lovely haunting to do now! :)) Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

I am very anxious for them to get busy with haunting the
monster. I am going to enjoy that as much as Veronica and Gladys. I can't help but wonder if anything could come of Tommy and Mildred having a relationship. I can't see it happening, but maybe you can. It's your story Sandra. Well done. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Lol, this is going to be their task from now on, and I know Gladys will enjoy it. I'm glad you're still enjoying my story, Nancy, 6-8 parts left + the prologue. So I have a lot of haunting to do. :)) Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by nancy_e_davis on 01-Apr-2019

That should be fun. Have at it, I will enjoy. Hugs. Nancy:)

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

Another very good instalment here. they'll be thinking Mildred's entirely lost the plot the way she keeps getting caught out! lol

Nice play to spook at Churchill's too.

The first thing we noticed, was how few patients were left in the building now. - I don't think you need the comma here.

I'd best be getting' back, or Tommy'll be wonderin' where I am." - need to drop the 'g' from getting' here.

All the best
G

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

I can always rely on you to find the 'g' that shouldn't be there, thank you so much for that, Gareth, and the comma that shouldn't, as well. Yes, Churchill is in for a treat! :)) Thanks for the lovely review, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from JDRBAR

Exceptional

Yeah! How could a relationship work with a time traveler? There's always a hitch to perfect love. Alas!
Great chapter. Can't wait til the next chapter. I can just imagine Churchhill LOL.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019

Thank you so much, Diane, for the sixer!! That is the one big problem, and it had to crop up sometime. Poor Mildred. As you can imagine, there is going to be some fun up ahead. lol. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx