Comment from Randa Dayle

Excellent

My favorite sentence...
"Because even your blood disgusts me, filthy animal."

Great as usual!! No disappointments, characters are multidementional...love it!!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019

Thank you so much for keeping up with the gang, Randa -- it means the world to me!! :) ;) Take care, Beautiful Lady, and have a wonderful weekend! :) ;) Yvette :)

Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

This is getting interesting, Yvette. I see Mister Atkinson has met (I believe Demetrius) the speech was to formal, :) So we are in for some Isis adventures I have to read more of those gods. I just hope you are not radical in another way. I like the setting as well as the revenge that the people of the Refuge give out. You may want to check this line "an unwanted to surprise." I don't think you need (to) but then again what do I know?

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019

Thanx for the review, Jose -- you are so very 'on top of things' ... good for you!! :) ;) And thanx for the catch there -- appreciate it! :) ;) Yvette

Comment from royowen

Excellent

It's becoming more and more mysteriouser and mysteriouser each episode, I was struggling to see the comnnection with this one Yvette, was that Demetrius? Oh well, it doesn't matter, this is like one of those book, hard to work out what's going on...or not going on. I must admit, I sympathise with Theo, a bit wet, but who isn't. Well done, great complex plot, with even complexer characters, good job Yvette, blessings, Roy ,

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019

They are certainly easier to keep track of reading a bit more in a sitting and 'less spread out over time' ... that is the downside, I guess, but I do so appreciate your trying!! :) ;) Thanx and have a great weekend over there, Roy! :) ;) Yvette

reply by royowen on 29-Mar-2019

I am catching it now Yvette, it's worth sticking around in my experience, fine writing,

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Yvette,

This is very well written, as always. An intriguing read that is very well articulated. Nothing to suggest revising. Thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 29-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019

Thanx so much for checking in on the gang, Jan -- much appreciated! ;) Yvette

reply by HealingMuse on 29-Mar-2019

Hi Yvette, My pleasure. I am going to join your fan club again because I've not been getting email alerts for your releases. Have a great evening. Jan :-)

reply by HealingMuse on 29-Mar-2019

Gratz on win!! Yaaay! I loved your Cherry Blossom poem! :-)

PS It is saying I'm already a fan. Paging Tom. lol