Shards
A Swap Quatrain Rhyming Poem Entry14 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaack! How did I miss this one?? The start of school is always nutty, but I'm sure I haven't skipped anybody in my messages... ugh!! :) Anyway....
CONGRATULATIONS!! Hope I'm not too tardy in these wishes (school's got my timetable off!) ;) :)
And your words are so very true here, June -- words are more painful sometimes than a physical jab ... especially the typed/written ones that are emblazoned on our brains and the page/screen forever!! ;) :)
Take care and thank you for always sharing your talents with all of us! ;) ;) Yvette ;)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Aaack! How did I miss this one?? The start of school is always nutty, but I'm sure I haven't skipped anybody in my messages... ugh!! :) Anyway....
CONGRATULATIONS!! Hope I'm not too tardy in these wishes (school's got my timetable off!) ;) :)
And your words are so very true here, June -- words are more painful sometimes than a physical jab ... especially the typed/written ones that are emblazoned on our brains and the page/screen forever!! ;) :)
Take care and thank you for always sharing your talents with all of us! ;) ;) Yvette ;)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This excellent poem gets my last 6! Your swap quatrain is skillfully and accurately
written. The theme conveyed is one that should be written on the hearts of all
who have children in their care!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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This excellent poem gets my last 6! Your swap quatrain is skillfully and accurately
written. The theme conveyed is one that should be written on the hearts of all
who have children in their care!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your sentiments. And I especially appreciate the generous rating!
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi June. This is a very well written swap quatrain. It reads smoothly and with good rhyme. The image works nicely with your piece. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Hi June. This is a very well written swap quatrain. It reads smoothly and with good rhyme. The image works nicely with your piece. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your insights!
Comment from RGstar
I am giving you a little six for the creativity and repeat lines working well. It seems a simple poem, but simple does not mean not good, in fact, simple always, for me, the best meanings in life.
Good luck in the competition.
Hope it goes well.
My best wishes.
I like rhymes . I was thinking of entering but perhaps enjoy reading instead.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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I am giving you a little six for the creativity and repeat lines working well. It seems a simple poem, but simple does not mean not good, in fact, simple always, for me, the best meanings in life.
Good luck in the competition.
Hope it goes well.
My best wishes.
I like rhymes . I was thinking of entering but perhaps enjoy reading instead.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your insights! And I especially appreciate your generous rating. You should enter the contest yourself, as your poetry is always unique and heartfelt!
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very well written rhyming poem you have penned for the contest about shards. You used great descriptive words and very interesting imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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June, This is a very well written rhyming poem you have penned for the contest about shards. You used great descriptive words and very interesting imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your insights!
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you are so welcome my friend! blessings!
Comment from Lordinajamjar
I love this poem June. I am not yet familiar with all the different poem format, but I like the reuse and slight switch of the words in the first and last verses of each stanza.
Very well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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I love this poem June. I am not yet familiar with all the different poem format, but I like the reuse and slight switch of the words in the first and last verses of each stanza.
Very well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your insights!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming swap quatrain poem. When we teach our children all the right things from a young age they will know not to seek any other way to satisfy their needs.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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A very well-written rhyming swap quatrain poem. When we teach our children all the right things from a young age they will know not to seek any other way to satisfy their needs.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your insights!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a very nice entry for the Rhyming poetry contest, June. The swap quatrain is not an easy one to write. I think you did a good job with this one. The only suggestion would be to find a way to use 'regret' in place of 'forget' in line fifteen to eliminate repeating get and forget. Well done otherwise. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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This is a very nice entry for the Rhyming poetry contest, June. The swap quatrain is not an easy one to write. I think you did a good job with this one. The only suggestion would be to find a way to use 'regret' in place of 'forget' in line fifteen to eliminate repeating get and forget. Well done otherwise. Nancy:)
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review - and offer suggestions. Will certaiinly go back and revise accordingly.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi June,
This is a terrific poem and a super contest entry. Wise words you convey, my friend. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Hi June,
This is a terrific poem and a super contest entry. Wise words you convey, my friend. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights.
Comment from Nanny 6
Wow! This was a brilliant poem to reflect how sharp and cutting our words can be. You did a fabulous job with your rhyme and rhythm in this Quantrain poem. Good luck in the contest. Judy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Wow! This was a brilliant poem to reflect how sharp and cutting our words can be. You did a fabulous job with your rhyme and rhythm in this Quantrain poem. Good luck in the contest. Judy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights.
