Sit on a Cloud
A love poem to my departed wife.72 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This poem does show deep emotion and a dream of being reunited in the future in a place where all is bliss. The dream would come to fulfillment when the two who love each other are together once again..
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This poem does show deep emotion and a dream of being reunited in the future in a place where all is bliss. The dream would come to fulfillment when the two who love each other are together once again..
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Feeling poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery. This is a very sweet love poem to your departed wife. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very well written Feeling poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery. This is a very sweet love poem to your departed wife. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Willie,
Your true feelings are apparent in this lovely tribute to your late wife. Sometimes great poems are borne from pain and sorrow. All of yours I've read so far are of that caliber
Good luck, Willie, with this poem.
I lost someone too years ago. He was my soulmate.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Willie,
Your true feelings are apparent in this lovely tribute to your late wife. Sometimes great poems are borne from pain and sorrow. All of yours I've read so far are of that caliber
Good luck, Willie, with this poem.
I lost someone too years ago. He was my soulmate.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
Comment from Sally Law
This is a sweet one, Willie. Beautifully penned and illustrated. We have much in common as we have been joined in marriage to another and in Christ. A sacred union and one that spans eternity.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
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This is a sweet one, Willie. Beautifully penned and illustrated. We have much in common as we have been joined in marriage to another and in Christ. A sacred union and one that spans eternity.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
Comment from lancellot
Great work. Nothing to suggest as far as the content.
I do suggest a slight format change:
Some day we'll cross the raging river,
Climb the mountain high.
We'll ride the eagle as it soars
Through the endless sky.
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We'll walk on rainbows, ride the wind,
See as far as the eye can see.
We'll dream our dreams and when we're through,
Come sit on a cloud with me.
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Great work. Nothing to suggest as far as the content.
I do suggest a slight format change:
Some day we'll cross the raging river,
Climb the mountain high.
We'll ride the eagle as it soars
Through the endless sky.
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We'll walk on rainbows, ride the wind,
See as far as the eye can see.
We'll dream our dreams and when we're through,
Come sit on a cloud with me.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This love poem to your departed wife speaks the essence and effect of emotions and feelings you could not forget and so now express what you could do for her and expect from her you could dream or do anything; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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This love poem to your departed wife speaks the essence and effect of emotions and feelings you could not forget and so now express what you could do for her and expect from her you could dream or do anything; well said, well done.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your kind words and stars.
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is quite lovely. I believe that when our loved ones depart, their souls do come and visit us from time to time. I'll bet your wife is still inspiring your writings. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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This is quite lovely. I believe that when our loved ones depart, their souls do come and visit us from time to time. I'll bet your wife is still inspiring your writings. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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I agree with your comment. Thanks for the review and stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I really enjoyed your emotional words here Willie and you touched my heart with these words, a well rhymed and metered poem, such a joy to read and you receive my first six of the week, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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I really enjoyed your emotional words here Willie and you touched my heart with these words, a well rhymed and metered poem, such a joy to read and you receive my first six of the week, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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I am honored to receive your first six, Dolly. Thank you very much.
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You deserve them Willie for this wonderfully touching poem, love Dolly x
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a touching tribute to your late life. I especially like the last line, which repeats the title of the piece, although it is somewhat fanciful. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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This is a touching tribute to your late life. I especially like the last line, which repeats the title of the piece, although it is somewhat fanciful. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Susan, for your review and stars.
Comment from Michele Harber
What a lucky woman your wife must have been, to have a husband who not only loved her so much but knew how to put his feelings into words. The images you paint are lovely and inviting and incredibly romantic. Your rhymes are simple but effective. My only question is why, with such a romantic poem, you didn't choose to give it a more romantic appearance.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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What a lucky woman your wife must have been, to have a husband who not only loved her so much but knew how to put his feelings into words. The images you paint are lovely and inviting and incredibly romantic. Your rhymes are simple but effective. My only question is why, with such a romantic poem, you didn't choose to give it a more romantic appearance.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Thank you Michele for your helpful review and stars I made some changes to the poem, check it out.
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I just looked, Willie, and it's absolutely perfect! I don't think you could have found a better picture. I love it and, if she's looking down from heaven at the moment, I suspect your wife does too.
