Sit on a Cloud
A love poem to my departed wife.72 total reviews
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
I'm sorry for your loss. I'm sure your wife continues to appreciate your poems. The poem has solid rhymes and great visuals. The meter bounces about a bit but not so much so as to distract the reader. Well done.
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I'm sorry for your loss. I'm sure your wife continues to appreciate your poems. The poem has solid rhymes and great visuals. The meter bounces about a bit but not so much so as to distract the reader. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's a pretty good one, Willie. A fine love poem to your wife. Nice picture, too. Now, Willie, are you exaggerating the number of poems that you wrote to your wife?
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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That's a pretty good one, Willie. A fine love poem to your wife. Nice picture, too. Now, Willie, are you exaggerating the number of poems that you wrote to your wife?
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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I have never counted them Paul, but she is my favorite subject and I have a box full. Thanks for the review and stars,
Comment from bob cullen
What a beautiful poem to write to your wife. The words flow magically together. I have just one request. If you ever learn how to master this method of flight, could you please share it with me. Love the thought behind this poem. Sorry, I don't have a six
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What a beautiful poem to write to your wife. The words flow magically together. I have just one request. If you ever learn how to master this method of flight, could you please share it with me. Love the thought behind this poem. Sorry, I don't have a six
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a loving tribute to you wife and to love itself. I love how it builds to the end stanzas which sum up the poem nicely. Love these lines
We'll dream our dreams and when we're through,
Come sit on a cloud with me.
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a loving tribute to you wife and to love itself. I love how it builds to the end stanzas which sum up the poem nicely. Love these lines
We'll dream our dreams and when we're through,
Come sit on a cloud with me.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
Comment from J L Graves
Your poem is a beautiful tribute to your wife. The structure is well done, and it follows the requirements of the challenge. The photo is a good match for the poetry.
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Your poem is a beautiful tribute to your wife. The structure is well done, and it follows the requirements of the challenge. The photo is a good match for the poetry.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a beautiful and inspiring poem of love. Your love for your wife is evident in every line. We should all know love like this.
Blessings
Janet
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This is a beautiful and inspiring poem of love. Your love for your wife is evident in every line. We should all know love like this.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is a very emotional poem. Every sentence is touching my heart as I am a widower.
I still miss her after all these years. Looking at past photos will bring back good memories.
Thanks for sharing
Good luck to your contest
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This is a very emotional poem. Every sentence is touching my heart as I am a widower.
I still miss her after all these years. Looking at past photos will bring back good memories.
Thanks for sharing
Good luck to your contest
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This was a really nice and sweet poem. I loved the sense of wonder and magic in this piece. Lovely imagery and heartfelt emotions. Thanks for sharing!
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This was a really nice and sweet poem. I loved the sense of wonder and magic in this piece. Lovely imagery and heartfelt emotions. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
Comment from Ulla
And you did that so very well. This is a poem about the deep love you felt and still feel for beloved late wife. It touched me deeply. Thank you so much for sharing. Ulla:)))
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And you did that so very well. This is a poem about the deep love you felt and still feel for beloved late wife. It touched me deeply. Thank you so much for sharing. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
Comment from nomi338
Young love and its imaginings are really creative, most especially when the ones creating it thing that they are deeply and meaningfully in love and committed to each other. Sadly, the real world all too soon intrudes and snatches us back to Earth. This is a very nicely penned work. Congratulations.
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Young love and its imaginings are really creative, most especially when the ones creating it thing that they are deeply and meaningfully in love and committed to each other. Sadly, the real world all too soon intrudes and snatches us back to Earth. This is a very nicely penned work. Congratulations.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
