Sit on a Cloud
A love poem to my departed wife.72 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
Great rhyme and meter in your brief love poem to your late wife. You don't actually say if you wrote it before or after her death and that context might well make a difference as to how a reader interprets it, especially the final line.
Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Steve
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Great rhyme and meter in your brief love poem to your late wife. You don't actually say if you wrote it before or after her death and that context might well make a difference as to how a reader interprets it, especially the final line.
Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is so lovely and moving--a sincere expression of love that has endured far beyond the loss of your wife. Such beautiful, descriptive thoughts you have!
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Your poem is so lovely and moving--a sincere expression of love that has endured far beyond the loss of your wife. Such beautiful, descriptive thoughts you have!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was absolutely priceless. It was very upbeat and innocent. The devotion you have for her was quite evident in this poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Gretchen
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This was absolutely priceless. It was very upbeat and innocent. The devotion you have for her was quite evident in this poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Sit on a Cloud, sees the world in a series of bigger than life engagements which, in their hyperbole, emphasize the down to earth desire to be with another. Understood.
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This poem, Sit on a Cloud, sees the world in a series of bigger than life engagements which, in their hyperbole, emphasize the down to earth desire to be with another. Understood.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A nice poem. You have adroitly walked the line and avoided smultz while using poetic words. The flow is good. The rhymes are unforced. The images are clear.
Thanks for a good read.
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A nice poem. You have adroitly walked the line and avoided smultz while using poetic words. The flow is good. The rhymes are unforced. The images are clear.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
Comment from irishauthorme
What a touching devotional.
Some losses leave a void that can never be filled. We do have those memories, I play mine like old movies and sometimes they are a comfort.
I like to think that we will be rejoined and do all the things together that you wrote in your poem.
irish
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What a touching devotional.
Some losses leave a void that can never be filled. We do have those memories, I play mine like old movies and sometimes they are a comfort.
I like to think that we will be rejoined and do all the things together that you wrote in your poem.
irish
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
Comment from Boogienights
This is beautiful and uplifting. I'm sorry you lost your wife, but I truly believe we will be reunited with those we love, in heaven. I know you will do all of those things together. Best if luck in the contest.
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This is beautiful and uplifting. I'm sorry you lost your wife, but I truly believe we will be reunited with those we love, in heaven. I know you will do all of those things together. Best if luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
What a wonderful testament to bless your wife with. I too, feel this way about my wife, I only wish I would have thought of the words to say it in such a clear manner as you did.
Very nice, Great rhyming, clearly written and easily understood, and full of emotion for that one special person in your life, your wife. Bravo!!!
Good job
Gary M
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What a wonderful testament to bless your wife with. I too, feel this way about my wife, I only wish I would have thought of the words to say it in such a clear manner as you did.
Very nice, Great rhyming, clearly written and easily understood, and full of emotion for that one special person in your life, your wife. Bravo!!!
Good job
Gary M
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A lovely remembrance poem with deep feelings for a loved one.
Love knows no bounds and can last through life and death for any who hold deep love in their heart.
You paint a descriptive and emotive poem which expresses the deep and lasting feeling of love for a departed spouse.
Blessings
Shirley
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A lovely remembrance poem with deep feelings for a loved one.
Love knows no bounds and can last through life and death for any who hold deep love in their heart.
You paint a descriptive and emotive poem which expresses the deep and lasting feeling of love for a departed spouse.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
Comment from Frances Jean
A delightful poem with great end rhyming and some nice alliteration. Ah, we all have dreams and hunger to fulfill them, but there's nothing so comforting as sitting with your partner at the end of the day or going for a walk hand in hand. I enjoyed it very much...thanks for sharing such a loving tribute to your wife.
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A delightful poem with great end rhyming and some nice alliteration. Ah, we all have dreams and hunger to fulfill them, but there's nothing so comforting as sitting with your partner at the end of the day or going for a walk hand in hand. I enjoyed it very much...thanks for sharing such a loving tribute to your wife.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
