Pain
A contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 3-5-7 poem and entry for the contest.
Yes, pills barely last a day, if that.
Intriguing art work to match your words
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
PS Your font barely shows up, maybe use yellow or red
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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You've written an excellent 3-5-7 poem and entry for the contest.
Yes, pills barely last a day, if that.
Intriguing art work to match your words
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
PS Your font barely shows up, maybe use yellow or red
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks for reviewing and your great comments and suggestions, I have gone in twice to change it to red but it is just not taking.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your pain is our gain today. Your simple verse spells out one alternative. (BTW ... I am not in favor of the abuse or over use of those pills.)
Your red lettering is perfectly matched with your selected illustration and text. I would consider raising the font size a bit to give some FS members an opportunity to read/see your words in a new light.
Best wishes in your entry.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Your pain is our gain today. Your simple verse spells out one alternative. (BTW ... I am not in favor of the abuse or over use of those pills.)
Your red lettering is perfectly matched with your selected illustration and text. I would consider raising the font size a bit to give some FS members an opportunity to read/see your words in a new light.
Best wishes in your entry.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and your great comments. I will endeavor to change the font. Thanks for the good luck wishes.
Comment from kiwijenny
Pills usually just mask the problem...pain is a symptom of an underlying cause...nsaids can ruin joints long term,,,,and are hard on the liver... I try to avoid all pain meds especially opioids
God bless
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Pills usually just mask the problem...pain is a symptom of an underlying cause...nsaids can ruin joints long term,,,,and are hard on the liver... I try to avoid all pain meds especially opioids
God bless
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and your words of wisdom, blessed be.
Comment from jenintorre
Hi there mystery writer
Yes this is a very frightening fact and very true. A good 3-7-5 poem. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Hi there mystery writer
Yes this is a very frightening fact and very true. A good 3-7-5 poem. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you for reviewing, for your great comments and for the good luck wishes.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Great graphic you've chosen to complement you verse. It is certainly quite effective in helping to convey a sense of a painful condition. Your verse conforms to the contest requirements and is well written. But, I would caution about pain pills... I worked for some years as an addiction counselor for those dependent upon opioids. Of the many hundreds of people I provided service to, only a couple were hooked from recreational drugs: the others became addicted by taking prescription pain pills. (Sorry, I don't mean to be preachy, but it's a scary topic and one that I have first-hand knowledge of from the professional side.) Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Great graphic you've chosen to complement you verse. It is certainly quite effective in helping to convey a sense of a painful condition. Your verse conforms to the contest requirements and is well written. But, I would caution about pain pills... I worked for some years as an addiction counselor for those dependent upon opioids. Of the many hundreds of people I provided service to, only a couple were hooked from recreational drugs: the others became addicted by taking prescription pain pills. (Sorry, I don't mean to be preachy, but it's a scary topic and one that I have first-hand knowledge of from the professional side.) Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing and your great comments. Your good luck wishes are well appreciated. I truly understand your preachy message which is so true.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I hate to think of anyone hurting, but this is simply FACT. Some of us have painful issues we have to deal with and must use some kind of medication to help us along. I know my Celebrex makes life livable! hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I hate to think of anyone hurting, but this is simply FACT. Some of us have painful issues we have to deal with and must use some kind of medication to help us along. I know my Celebrex makes life livable! hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you Robyn for your great comments and good luck wishes.
