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Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Scene at the Mall"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from sunnilicious
You're hilarious. Creative. Well thought out and clearly written. I love the mall too. I think online shopping makes us robots. I ran out of sixer's and this is deserving work. Nice work :)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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You're hilarious. Creative. Well thought out and clearly written. I love the mall too. I think online shopping makes us robots. I ran out of sixer's and this is deserving work. Nice work :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thanks, sunnilicious, for the positive review. Bill
Comment from Teri7
lol This is another very cute script with Ned and Pons. You always come up with very cute and clever things for them to say. I enjoy reading them! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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lol This is another very cute script with Ned and Pons. You always come up with very cute and clever things for them to say. I enjoy reading them! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from judiverse
This is so true about the malls. The big mall in my community is pretty much a goner, having lost Sears, Macy's and Elder Beerman.
They certainly didn't build that new Amazone place in New York. When I was a kid, I often heard the expression "Where ignorance is bliss, tis folly to be wise." Ned does seem to be blissful in his ignorance. "Warehouse and "where's the house" sounds like it could have come from an Abbot and Costello routine. Sometimes Ned is so ignorant he sounds almost deep, as if there must be some hidden meaning in what he says. judi
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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This is so true about the malls. The big mall in my community is pretty much a goner, having lost Sears, Macy's and Elder Beerman.
They certainly didn't build that new Amazone place in New York. When I was a kid, I often heard the expression "Where ignorance is bliss, tis folly to be wise." Ned does seem to be blissful in his ignorance. "Warehouse and "where's the house" sounds like it could have come from an Abbot and Costello routine. Sometimes Ned is so ignorant he sounds almost deep, as if there must be some hidden meaning in what he says. judi
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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He baffles me.
Comment from 24chas
This was a fun read, Bill. I love the back and forth between the two and the confusion that entails. Some really funny stuff in this script. Nice job.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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This was a fun read, Bill. I love the back and forth between the two and the confusion that entails. Some really funny stuff in this script. Nice job.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thanks, Chas
Comment from Earl Corp
The give and take between Ned and Pons reminds me of Abbot and Costello, with Pons being Abbot. Maybe you could do a Ned and Pons at opening day at the ballpark. Nice job.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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The give and take between Ned and Pons reminds me of Abbot and Costello, with Pons being Abbot. Maybe you could do a Ned and Pons at opening day at the ballpark. Nice job.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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I think Ned can underthink just about anyone.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I definitely won't let Ned make me a hot dog with mustard. I'm old, but still too young to die. LOL!
That's so true about shopping online. I have not been to the mall in over five years. I buy what I need from Amazon and a few other places online. So easy, and returns are easy too. :)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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I definitely won't let Ned make me a hot dog with mustard. I'm old, but still too young to die. LOL!
That's so true about shopping online. I have not been to the mall in over five years. I buy what I need from Amazon and a few other places online. So easy, and returns are easy too. :)
Comment Written 28-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Can Ned get dumber? I guess we shop for everything but groceries on line. Then there?s yard sales.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I am not sure why Pons even tries to communicate with Ned as he is bound to misconstrue every correction he gives him. Fun dialogue as always and true about the malls going away.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Lol. I am not sure why Pons even tries to communicate with Ned as he is bound to misconstrue every correction he gives him. Fun dialogue as always and true about the malls going away.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks, lyenochka.
Comment from nomi338
Wow! Ned is actually creating history. He is becoming the dumbest individual in the history of the world. Ned is a very special kind of dumb. He is so dumb that he almost seems smart. Because everyone will automatically think that no one could possibly be that dumb.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Wow! Ned is actually creating history. He is becoming the dumbest individual in the history of the world. Ned is a very special kind of dumb. He is so dumb that he almost seems smart. Because everyone will automatically think that no one could possibly be that dumb.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Success!!
Comment from JudyE
Haha. It's surprising how easy it is to get the wrong end of the stick and trying to explain further just increases the problem. Thanks for a fun read. I didn't find any glitches.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Haha. It's surprising how easy it is to get the wrong end of the stick and trying to explain further just increases the problem. Thanks for a fun read. I didn't find any glitches.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks, Judy, for giving this a look.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
As always this is very entertaining Bill. This reminds me of conversations I used to have with my Grandma who was deaf and always got the wrong end of the stick, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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As always this is very entertaining Bill. This reminds me of conversations I used to have with my Grandma who was deaf and always got the wrong end of the stick, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks, Dolly
