If The Jester Cried At Night
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Ghost of Love"A collection of favourite poems by mrgrunty.
12 total reviews
Comment from warpedrevolution
Short and unwieldy. It had some good words but nothing that could make this poem truly great. It just seemed like an afterthought. A blurb.
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Short and unwieldy. It had some good words but nothing that could make this poem truly great. It just seemed like an afterthought. A blurb.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2006
Comment from Sheila Bruce
This is awesome. Now if someone had told me a week ago that I'd review a four line poem and call it awesome I would likely have called them a liar, but it is. Very evocative and haunting in and of itself.
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This is awesome. Now if someone had told me a week ago that I'd review a four line poem and call it awesome I would likely have called them a liar, but it is. Very evocative and haunting in and of itself.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2006
Comment from bappjf
Short and sweet and simply put. I hear those whispers, as well.
I find the word "take" to be a little lacking -- I'm sure you can find a more powerful word to use here. Perhaps, "inhabit", "torment", "invade".
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Short and sweet and simply put. I hear those whispers, as well.
I find the word "take" to be a little lacking -- I'm sure you can find a more powerful word to use here. Perhaps, "inhabit", "torment", "invade".
Comment Written 04-Mar-2006
Comment from Beatlegirl61
Excellent stuff here...i really enjoyed the message conveyed , and once again great poetry...peacxe and happiness and all the best, Carol ::))
'Beatle' quote: "You can radiate everythiig you are..." (Dig a pony)
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Excellent stuff here...i really enjoyed the message conveyed , and once again great poetry...peacxe and happiness and all the best, Carol ::))
'Beatle' quote: "You can radiate everythiig you are..." (Dig a pony)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2006
Comment from terryangelo
If I had any of my six stars left, you would definitely get one for this. Such a lot of beauty in so few lines! The subtlety of the image is outstanding. Wonderful job.
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If I had any of my six stars left, you would definitely get one for this. Such a lot of beauty in so few lines! The subtlety of the image is outstanding. Wonderful job.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2006
Comment from sellgirls
This is compelling by itself, but your introduction really poses the challenge this little piece deserves. I think it can mean something different to everyone who reads it, and I think you intended it that way. I took it as a relationship that is fairly (red) "hot" at the moment!
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This is compelling by itself, but your introduction really poses the challenge this little piece deserves. I think it can mean something different to everyone who reads it, and I think you intended it that way. I took it as a relationship that is fairly (red) "hot" at the moment!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2006
Comment from Lisloh
Oh if you only knew how this effected me....
Right on time...
Thank you for creating this and sharing
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Excellent presentation
You haunt my days,
and take my nights.
when sleep is rare...
you whisper.
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Oh if you only knew how this effected me....
Right on time...
Thank you for creating this and sharing
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Excellent presentation
You haunt my days,
and take my nights.
when sleep is rare...
you whisper.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2006
Comment from ScarletAffliction
Please, sir, I want MORE!! Hee hee.
I like this. Short and sweet and compelling. It *just* barely suggests it's going to tell you everything, then doesn't, leaving you to ponder. Good stuff.
You rock, australia!!
Fevah
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Please, sir, I want MORE!! Hee hee.
I like this. Short and sweet and compelling. It *just* barely suggests it's going to tell you everything, then doesn't, leaving you to ponder. Good stuff.
You rock, australia!!
Fevah
Comment Written 03-Mar-2006
Comment from AuroraSky
The essence of insomnia runs through these words...the use of key words to reach into the reader's emotions etc...the only thing I want to ask more from myself at the mo, is more sleep!
So understanding the depth of this poem is easily done. Ghosts of love extend beyond those of romantic themes.
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The essence of insomnia runs through these words...the use of key words to reach into the reader's emotions etc...the only thing I want to ask more from myself at the mo, is more sleep!
So understanding the depth of this poem is easily done. Ghosts of love extend beyond those of romantic themes.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2006
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is a very short piece but it has a feel to it , I like the way that you have presented this the colour background is the true colour of love well done regards Fuller
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This is a very short piece but it has a feel to it , I like the way that you have presented this the colour background is the true colour of love well done regards Fuller
Comment Written 03-Mar-2006
