Celebration
Living day to day9 total reviews
Comment from LaRosa
awesome twist at the end, Jenin! Not easy to do in just three little lines. You made me smile.
Now, as I need quite a few more words to have this thing accept my review, guess I'll play along with them here. You definitely have great and original ideas!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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awesome twist at the end, Jenin! Not easy to do in just three little lines. You made me smile.
Now, as I need quite a few more words to have this thing accept my review, guess I'll play along with them here. You definitely have great and original ideas!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Thanks
Comment from Dawn Munro
Aaaaaaaaahahahaha! Shame on you. Now I am past my 'sell by date' too, I guess. I say, "Tough noogies. The consumer's loss. I'm bargain-basement priced." *grin* You did it again. I'm charmed!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Aaaaaaaaahahahaha! Shame on you. Now I am past my 'sell by date' too, I guess. I say, "Tough noogies. The consumer's loss. I'm bargain-basement priced." *grin* You did it again. I'm charmed!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hahahahahaha. This is great! What a fun way to remember to appreciate every day in and of itself. I like the picture you chose to accompany this, too. Good luck in the contest! xo
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Hahahahahaha. This is great! What a fun way to remember to appreciate every day in and of itself. I like the picture you chose to accompany this, too. Good luck in the contest! xo
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks Rachelle, much appreciated.
Comment from patcelaw
I am past my use by date and still enjoying life. I love this poem and the sense of humor contained therein. Have a blessed week.
Patricia
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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I am past my use by date and still enjoying life. I love this poem and the sense of humor contained therein. Have a blessed week.
Patricia
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Many thanms
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We may get old but as long as we are not cold then there is life and we can still enjoy all the same things in life as anyone else! Anyway I never heed sell by dates! He he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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We may get old but as long as we are not cold then there is life and we can still enjoy all the same things in life as anyone else! Anyway I never heed sell by dates! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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No neither do I. Many thanks Dolly. X
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. I love the piece itself and it definitely leads to celebration any time you get good stuff after that date. The picture really enhances the work. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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This was a good read. I love the piece itself and it definitely leads to celebration any time you get good stuff after that date. The picture really enhances the work. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thanks Chas for your continuel support.
Comment from victor 66
Yup, I know the feeling. But for me, I feel that I've been very fortunate and my life has been very good. I still enjoy everyday and death will come when it does. Much like the lady in your photo, I have no regrets. Good words, good message and I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Yup, I know the feeling. But for me, I feel that I've been very fortunate and my life has been very good. I still enjoy everyday and death will come when it does. Much like the lady in your photo, I have no regrets. Good words, good message and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Many thanks Victor
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You are most welcome, Mystery Writer.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 senryu for the contest
What could be more apt than the celebration of life
cherishing each day as we grow older.
Excellent picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 senryu for the contest
What could be more apt than the celebration of life
cherishing each day as we grow older.
Excellent picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Awwwww - no you're not past any date. Not in my opinion. But it's a humorous, if self-deprecating poem. A nice contest entry that should fare well. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Awwwww - no you're not past any date. Not in my opinion. But it's a humorous, if self-deprecating poem. A nice contest entry that should fare well. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Yes Jan you are right, I am not. Just a bit of fun. Thanks for your kind words. Much appreciated.
