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Create AD COPY contest entry20 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahaha! Crater front properties? What a polished set of ads. If you're not in the advertising business, maybe you should be! (*grin*) The first two months of breathable oxygen are free? HAHAHAHAHAHA! Radiation blast glasses to watch Earth on Button day? Gravity boots? Condo implosion insurance? AAAaaaaaaaHAHAHAHA!
This is truly thinking 'outside the box' brilliance, IMHO. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Hahahaha! Crater front properties? What a polished set of ads. If you're not in the advertising business, maybe you should be! (*grin*) The first two months of breathable oxygen are free? HAHAHAHAHAHA! Radiation blast glasses to watch Earth on Button day? Gravity boots? Condo implosion insurance? AAAaaaaaaaHAHAHAHA!
This is truly thinking 'outside the box' brilliance, IMHO. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Dawn. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. I'm glad you had a chuckle or two out of this silliness. That's all I was really going for. Have a great upcoming weekend. Thank you again..
Ron
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It was very much my pleasure, Ron. Congratulations on the win. :)
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Thank you, D.
Comment from Pantygynt
I believe you have thought of everything right down to number 6 above. The most impressive thing about this was the neatly concealed catch. After those first free two months your breathable oxygen will cost you $8,000 per month and that works out at at $96,000 per year.
The thought of becoming overdrawn on the oxygen bank keeps me firmly grounded on earth better than any complimentary issue gravity boots could do.
I don'tr have any problem with this being in the poetry site. Just call it a prose poem.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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I believe you have thought of everything right down to number 6 above. The most impressive thing about this was the neatly concealed catch. After those first free two months your breathable oxygen will cost you $8,000 per month and that works out at at $96,000 per year.
The thought of becoming overdrawn on the oxygen bank keeps me firmly grounded on earth better than any complimentary issue gravity boots could do.
I don'tr have any problem with this being in the poetry site. Just call it a prose poem.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Lol. Yeah, I figure if they can afford our multi million dollar homes they have plenty to spend on air. Haha. Thank you for the great review, Pantygynt. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a good one.
Ron
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
What an AWESOME entry! The free offers are hysterical, but, at the same time, right up there with the types of free offers we are bombarded with now. Some many people read 'FREE,' and that's as far as they go. They're hooked.
You certainly put much thought and creativity into your advertisements, and it shows.
Great job!!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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What an AWESOME entry! The free offers are hysterical, but, at the same time, right up there with the types of free offers we are bombarded with now. Some many people read 'FREE,' and that's as far as they go. They're hooked.
You certainly put much thought and creativity into your advertisements, and it shows.
Great job!!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, C Gale. Yes, I put some thought into this silly piece. Had to make it as humorous as I could, lol. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from Sally Law
This is a scream. Thank you, I needed a good laugh today. Who knew it would be in the ad campaign. A fresh take on the cheesy real estate offered on the too-good-to-be-true astronomical body closest to us. This was fresh and fun.
All my best to you and in the contest,
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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This is a scream. Thank you, I needed a good laugh today. Who knew it would be in the ad campaign. A fresh take on the cheesy real estate offered on the too-good-to-be-true astronomical body closest to us. This was fresh and fun.
All my best to you and in the contest,
Sal :+)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Sal. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great night.
Ron
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You too, Ron. I think you?re gonna win this one!
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Fingers crossed.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written advertisement for the rich people that will definitely take on the offer. There will be no point in going to the moon for the poor people they will not survive anyway.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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A very well-written advertisement for the rich people that will definitely take on the offer. There will be no point in going to the moon for the poor people they will not survive anyway.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Lol, yep it'll be pretty pricey to live on the moon. Thank you for the great review, Sandra.
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Very Crafty! I love it. I wish you would have used one "big" word, but I absolutely love the picture and the small print (perfect)! I am sorry I don't have a 6 to offer to you as this deserves it for sure! Very creative, funny and also quite honestly probably going to be something like this is our grandchildren's (if I have any) future. So thank you for making it palatable! My favorite line from Magazine ad, "you'll be the eclipse! My Virtual Six. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Very Crafty! I love it. I wish you would have used one "big" word, but I absolutely love the picture and the small print (perfect)! I am sorry I don't have a 6 to offer to you as this deserves it for sure! Very creative, funny and also quite honestly probably going to be something like this is our grandchildren's (if I have any) future. So thank you for making it palatable! My favorite line from Magazine ad, "you'll be the eclipse! My Virtual Six. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Hey, Fonda, hello. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big six offer. Yes, I hope our grandkid's kids won't be forced to make this transition just to survive. Hopefully we'll get it together before it comes to this. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from WryWriter
Amusing ads. People do need to pay more attention to the depletion of earth's resources, along with more environmental issues. The problem is, that if no national vote is taken on these subjects, corporations will continue along the same path. The billboard ad may be a bit much to read if you are placing it for passing motorists to read. But it is amusing, nevertheless. Good job!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Amusing ads. People do need to pay more attention to the depletion of earth's resources, along with more environmental issues. The problem is, that if no national vote is taken on these subjects, corporations will continue along the same path. The billboard ad may be a bit much to read if you are placing it for passing motorists to read. But it is amusing, nevertheless. Good job!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Wry W. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Clever contest entry! I enjoyed this line most: "...a lunar lifestyle awaits." It does sound promising and I agree with you thought--Earth is running out of natural resources.
It's time... well crafted and written.
My best in this contest,
Deborah
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
Clever contest entry! I enjoyed this line most: "...a lunar lifestyle awaits." It does sound promising and I agree with you thought--Earth is running out of natural resources.
It's time... well crafted and written.
My best in this contest,
Deborah
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review, Deborah. I appreciate the generous rating and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Ron
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My pleasure!
Comment from djsaxon
Think I just used up my last six-pack LOL. This is very very good. A sensational entry into the comp. It so reminds me of the Starship Troopers ads. I hope that you are old enough enough to remember that underrated tongue in cheek confection. Mate, I laughed from go to whoa. Cheers - DJ
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Think I just used up my last six-pack LOL. This is very very good. A sensational entry into the comp. It so reminds me of the Starship Troopers ads. I hope that you are old enough enough to remember that underrated tongue in cheek confection. Mate, I laughed from go to whoa. Cheers - DJ
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Yes, I'm plenty old enough to remember Starship Troopers. Lol. Thank you for spending your last sixer on my silly offering, DJ. I had a blast writing it. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from JudyE
What a great ad! And you've come up with wonderful free offers for those lucky ones who get in first.
I picked up one spag: - of all it's natural resources. - delete apostrophe.
Very entertaining writing and good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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What a great ad! And you've come up with wonderful free offers for those lucky ones who get in first.
I picked up one spag: - of all it's natural resources. - delete apostrophe.
Very entertaining writing and good luck.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the great review and for pointing out the goof, Judy. I'm glad you liked the piece.
