Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

Great points. But I wonder if this will fly when the CEC passes by, since it only describes a small portion of your day - just the part before you even get out of bed??

Just a thought. But I did enjoy. Good luck!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019

Hmmm. Maybe you are right about that. Thank you, Robyn. This is a genuine question here, not me "defending" my work: Do you think the part about being around children who love music and work to improve satisfies that aspect?

reply by robyn corum on 25-Mar-2019

It all seems to be included in the prayer before you start your day, so no. Not really

reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019

Alright. Thanks; I'll work on it! I appreciate your input very much.

Comment from Ashton Ari Partida

Excellent

I like that you're day begins with showing gratitude and practicing gratitude as well and not just preaching it. A humbling way to start the day that's for sure. Thank you for sharing!!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019

Thank you, Ashton. I appreciate your feedback very much.

reply by Ashton Ari Partida on 27-Mar-2019

You're very welcome!

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a good read. I enjoy this contest to see what a typical day is like for my fellow fanstorians. You seem to have a good life and you can't ask for more than that. Great job and good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019

Thank you, 24chas. I think we're all as happy with life as we decide we're going to be.