Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1 poem, Dream Big Enough for Everyone, has the right set up for syllables and reminds me that neurotics build castles in the air and psychotics live in them. Just kidding.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019

Thanx for dropping by, Sir Bill! :) Yvette

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Contest Author,

This is a beautiful poem with an empowering message and a gorgeous image. Great job! I think you have crafted a winner. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019

Thanx for your review, Jan -- much appreciated. :) :) Yvette

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about dreaming big enough to not only satisfy yourself but for everyone around you to benefit from the castles build in the air.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019

Thank you for your review, Sandra -- appreciate your time ... always! :) Take care! :) :)

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

I like it!! I can see this on a wall in an elementary school, giving encouragement to students. The educator in me loves this entry. I hope it does well. xo

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019

Thanx for your review on this one, Rachelle -- so glad you saw what I saw there! ;) :)

reply by Rachelle Allen on 25-Mar-2019

I certainly did. xo

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-I like your artowork
and presentation.
-You have met all the
requirements for the contest
very well.
-I like your message, too.
-It is positive and hopeful.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019

Thank you for your review, Pam! :)

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Mar-2019

You are welcome.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I would call this an excellent entry in the one/six/one/ contest, and we denizens of Fanstory certainly try to build fantasy lives and castles in the air, with varied results.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thank you for the review, LlJ -- much appreciated! :)

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Very good. I think you may be preaching to the converted here! The bigger the dream the better. Good luck with this one in the 1-6-1 contest. Start dreaming about what you're going to do with all that prize money...

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thank you for the review, Tony -- much appreciated! :)

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

I really like this one, bright and positive and uplifting. it's a breath of fresh air and leaves one with a smile. I wish you well in the contest..

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thank you for the review, dude -- take care! :)

Comment from Maria Millsaps

Good

This is a great 1-6-1 syllable poem. It impresses the importance of daring to do big things and sharing those big dreams with others.

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 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thank you for the review, Maria -- much appreciated! :)

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Dare....what a great word ....you get our attention with it.
Build...get to work...castles ...yes buttresses, portcullis, drawbridges...nope
in the air...clouds, jet streams maybe...more dreams.......share
I love dare to share
God bless

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thank you for the review, Jenny -- much appreciated! :)