To Take Our Leave
Loop Poem: One Last Look...42 total reviews
Comment from phil nelson
So well done!-you have easily mastered the loop genre here (something that I have so far failed at) and you have woven a lovely story within-the picture is so perfectly matched and brought a tear to my eye as I have two great friends in Georgia who still work their farm-they are both in their mid eighties and have been married 59 years-Thank you for this great entry
All the Best!
Phil
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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So well done!-you have easily mastered the loop genre here (something that I have so far failed at) and you have woven a lovely story within-the picture is so perfectly matched and brought a tear to my eye as I have two great friends in Georgia who still work their farm-they are both in their mid eighties and have been married 59 years-Thank you for this great entry
All the Best!
Phil
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Hello Phil!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review. I have been feeling very nostalgic lately about my parents, grandparents, and the land they all loved...
So pleased my words resonated with you...
Thank you again!
diane
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Mrs.,
This is such a bittersweet poem, my friend. It has a heavy feel to it. Yet it is a very well written.piece and a great contest entry. Thanks for sharing and best of luck. Jan
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Hi Mrs.,
This is such a bittersweet poem, my friend. It has a heavy feel to it. Yet it is a very well written.piece and a great contest entry. Thanks for sharing and best of luck. Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Hello Jan!
So pleased you enjoyed. So much of my parents and grandparents - and their love of their lands - are woven into this piece... Yes...bittersweet, indeed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from June Sargent
This is a lovely loop poem that captures the emotional turmoil of letting go - our homes, our past - but never our sweetest memories. Those we must treasure. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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This is a lovely loop poem that captures the emotional turmoil of letting go - our homes, our past - but never our sweetest memories. Those we must treasure. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Hello June!
So pleased you enjoyed and my words resonated with you.
Thank you!
diane
Comment from LIJ Red
Ten minutes of true satisfaction are a good total for a life? I think I had more than that, but Wolfy Boy is dern close...I think it worked better for you than the farmer in the song Café Down On The Corner...excellent post.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Ten minutes of true satisfaction are a good total for a life? I think I had more than that, but Wolfy Boy is dern close...I think it worked better for you than the farmer in the song Café Down On The Corner...excellent post.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Hah! LIJRed!
Thank you for your review! Smiles all around!
diane
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I've heard a lot about the small farmers who cant survive nowadays and that's what this poem made me think of. Selling the animals, selling the farm, trying to move on and give someone else a chance at it. You did great with this
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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I've heard a lot about the small farmers who cant survive nowadays and that's what this poem made me think of. Selling the animals, selling the farm, trying to move on and give someone else a chance at it. You did great with this
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Hello!
So pleased you enjoyed and my words resonated with you!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from damommy
What a lovely loop poem about two elderly people who must adopt a different lifestyle. Their memories will always be with them as they go on together in the next phase of their lives. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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What a lovely loop poem about two elderly people who must adopt a different lifestyle. Their memories will always be with them as they go on together in the next phase of their lives. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Hello Yvonne,
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
diane
Comment from Yvon
I liked this poem. I guess we all have to move on. Memories are wonderful things when filled with Love. To cherish and work on the land is a blessing from God. I was going to say you should write a poem of your notes until I got to the end.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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I liked this poem. I guess we all have to move on. Memories are wonderful things when filled with Love. To cherish and work on the land is a blessing from God. I was going to say you should write a poem of your notes until I got to the end.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Hello, Yvon,
Thank you for stopping by and the excellent rating.
Not certain what you mean by your last sentence, but, again, thank you for stopping by...
diane
Comment from Boogienights
This is a lovely loop poem, very worthy of winning the contest...I wish you luck. It's always hard letting go of things, especially when they are a big part of your life. You have illustrated this feeling well in this poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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This is a lovely loop poem, very worthy of winning the contest...I wish you luck. It's always hard letting go of things, especially when they are a big part of your life. You have illustrated this feeling well in this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Hello!
Thank you ever so much for your excellent rating and positive review!
diane
Comment from kiwijenny
I can see this coming true for me and mine...this place has memories
But we've moved more than they have ...this is a tender poem speaking of love work and a life well lived but nearing its end...two people entwined
God bless
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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I can see this coming true for me and mine...this place has memories
But we've moved more than they have ...this is a tender poem speaking of love work and a life well lived but nearing its end...two people entwined
God bless
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Channeling my grandparents and parents in this offering.
Thank you so much for your excellent rating and positive review, Jenny.
So pleased my words resonated with you!
diane
Comment from Heather Knight
What a lovely story! It is sad but beautiful. I feel sad because it seems all their wonderful memories are going to be obliterated by the new owners...
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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What a lovely story! It is sad but beautiful. I feel sad because it seems all their wonderful memories are going to be obliterated by the new owners...
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Hello Maria!
It is sad...Channeling my parents and grandparents in this offering.
Thank you for your excellent rating and review.
Take Care!
diane
