Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

You paint a pretty picture in this Sevenelle poem June as you take us into your orchid world for a moment. Nice rhyming and your refrain couplet is lovely.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019

Thank you for dropping by to visit and review!

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hi June,

I really enjoyed this poetry form. I have not heard of it or seen it before. I will have to give it a try. I will take notes and put it on my list of poems to do.

I enjoyed your theme and wish I could follow you into that garden :)

Joy xx

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019

Thanks for dropping by my orchidarium! Your review and insights are always welcome.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Sevenelle poem about a special gate that leads to a wonderful secret garden where butterflies come together to have a feast at the beautiful flowers.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thanks for taking as stroll with me through my orchidarium! So glad you enjoyed this sevenelle.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is so beautiful June and if I lived closer I would call on you! He he he, your well chosen words are uplifting and joyful and orchids are so precious, just like you and your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thanks for taking as stroll with me through my orchidarium! So glad you enjoyed this sevenelle.

Comment from Lance S. Loria

Excellent

An orchid's world is what you'll see. A very enjoyable poem. Nice complimentary artwork with the gate. Great rhyme and rythm. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thanks for taking as stroll with me through my orchidarium! So glad you enjoyed this sevenelle.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi June,

This is an absolutely beautiful write! And a great contest entry. Good luck in the competition. I feel as if I'm touring your flower gardens with you, your verse flows so effortlessly. Nothing I see to suggest you consider improving upon. Thanks very much for sharing. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thanks for taking as stroll with me through my orchidarium! So glad you enjoyed this sevenelle.

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

I'm not a poet but I do like poetry that has a rhythmic metre and this is little gem is so easy to read. It trips along nicely and invites us to imagine all the beautiful colours that you mention. Thanks for sharing such a lovely piece.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thanks for taking as stroll with me through my orchidarium! So glad you enjoyed this sevenelle.

Comment from Ballad man

Excellent

Hey June, A very nice poem you have posted here nicely rhymed with a lovely flow. I can picture you all having a get together. You painted such beautiful picture here. I really enjoyed the photo and the poem. Well done, my friend....Pete

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thanks for taking as stroll with me through my orchidarium! So glad you enjoyed this sevenelle.

Comment from Tootie

Excellent

Awesome entry. Well-written and great flow and presentation. Hey, I'm from NH too! I really enjoyed reading this and also reading your profile information. I'm from the Lakes Region area. Blessings, Cathy

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thanks for taking as stroll with me through my orchidarium! So glad you enjoyed this sevenelle.

Comment from Randa Dayle

Excellent

Very lovely poem. I would love to come through your gate. I love the picture, your choice of fonts and how it flows. Good luck and keep sharing your talent!!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019

Thanks for taking as stroll with me through my orchidarium! So glad you enjoyed this sevenelle.