Comment from sfharper

Excellent

Hi Lance, I like your sense of humor and appreciation for things you value. The picture matches the content. I agree with your point that poems should flow easily, this is somewhat stilted and could be improved with consonance, rhyme, repetition, or any of the tools of poetry. Good use of format, though.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

Thanks for your comments. Noted. Thanks for the review.

Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

Oh, so pretty! Imagine waking up to this every morning... Very clever verse. You have a wonderful sense of humor. I will try to get to FB...could look at this picture all day, but would get no work done, LOL

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

Thanks for the review

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Lance! Your Lake Resort looks lovely... I bet you get some nice fishing in there. :) My family has a "Lake Resort" too. I'm the third generation... and there are already two behind me! I do think I like mine a little better though... yours looks a little crowded to me... lol

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

Well it's not a fishing camp for sure. A great home with pool, lots of decking and a great sunrise view. Sounds like you and I each live in the right place! Thanks for your review.

Comment from Randa Dayle

Good

How nice you have a beautiful view! And I am very glad you know the management... Ha! Ha! Nice poem about how grateful you are! Thanks for sharing!! :):)

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

The owner and general manager is a great guy. LOL
You rated with a 4 which indicates a good poem that requires an adjustment. A 5 rating is a good poem not requiring adjustment. Can you share with me what adjustment you felt was needed?
Thank you.

reply by Randa Dayle on 23-Mar-2019

Just an error...sorry about that!

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

Thanks

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

If rated in error can you contact the site administrator to correct it? I'd appreciate it.