Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Hooray! Our Bea is back! ;) Loved that hers and Sweet Puppy's defense position was cowering in the back of the cave! ;) Just wanted to point out that the first number of legs on the strange thing was eleven and then it was fifteen.....didn't know if it was a typo or if it was 'growing in Bea's mind....;) ;) Thank you so much, Liz, for bringing back Bea and friends - looking forward to meeting new ones, too! :) :) Yvette

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

Thank you for your enthusiastic review. Thank you also for the catch on the number of legs. Fifteen legs is premature in her sightings. Thank you so much.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

This so cute and really well done. I'm thinking the creature she saw was machinery of some kind, but I will have to wait to fine out. Well done, looking forward to more. Rex

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I will hope you continue reading to find what the creature is. This will be fun.

Comment from Randa Dayle

Excellent

Eleven Legged Mass! Oh my...what dangers are lurking!! Good job, well written, good characters. I think you have done a wonderful job. So keep on writing well!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

Thank you so much for your enthusiastic review. It made me smile.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Liz,

This is an absolutely adorable children's story. I love the way Scruffles is guarding his friends during the storm and your analogy of him catching a lightening bolt like a rolling ball. Thanks so much for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

Thank you so much for your enjoyable review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.