Mysterious Woman
A man encounters a mysterious woman.22 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
I liked this read, Lance. It had a good flow to it and I liked the pacing of it. I'd love to find out what happened to the woman, so please keep going. Nice job.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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I liked this read, Lance. It had a good flow to it and I liked the pacing of it. I'd love to find out what happened to the woman, so please keep going. Nice job.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thanks for reviewing it. I'm considering adding more to it.
Comment from Randa Dayle
Too bad he missed the last train home..but maybe she was hiding around the corner watching and waiting to see if he would look hard to find her... hmmm? Very nice story!!
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Too bad he missed the last train home..but maybe she was hiding around the corner watching and waiting to see if he would look hard to find her... hmmm? Very nice story!!
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the review. I had all kinds of mischief in mind but fell victim to time constraints...that's why I added an author note that more chapters could follow.
