Window Through My Eyes and Soul
for Fabulous free Verser Club17 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Teri,
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, wisdom and experiences.
There is no greater gift than God's love and nature is a perfect place to surrender to the beauty and wonder of His creation.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Hi Teri,
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, wisdom and experiences.
There is no greater gift than God's love and nature is a perfect place to surrender to the beauty and wonder of His creation.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very lovely comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Window Through My Eyes and Soul", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually up-lifting piece. This talented poet's work was a joy to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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"Window Through My Eyes and Soul", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually up-lifting piece. This talented poet's work was a joy to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and lovely comments. I appreciate your nice and kind thoughts! love and blessings, Teri
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Teri, as always you're more than welcome.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess xxoo
Comment from sfharper
Really good use of the sounds, sensations and images of nature mixed in with experience about God. It offers hope to many stuck inside from all the snows. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Really good use of the sounds, sensations and images of nature mixed in with experience about God. It offers hope to many stuck inside from all the snows. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the great review and lovely comments. There will be sun again for those stuck in the snow. I happen to love snow, but I love the springtime flowers too! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Pearl Edwards
We can tell that you've written this from your heart and soul Teri, and the joy you got from this walk outside, looking the through windows of you soul. thanks for sharing,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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We can tell that you've written this from your heart and soul Teri, and the joy you got from this walk outside, looking the through windows of you soul. thanks for sharing,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much Valda, my friend, for the great review and very lovely comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Teri. I think this is one of the nicest and best poems I've read of yours. It's written well and flows well. Your gratitude is apparent.
I noticed one little typo to fix here:
"With Him by my side I can't wander to (too) far off from the path He has chosen for me"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hi Teri. I think this is one of the nicest and best poems I've read of yours. It's written well and flows well. Your gratitude is apparent.
I noticed one little typo to fix here:
"With Him by my side I can't wander to (too) far off from the path He has chosen for me"
Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much Marilyn for the great review and help. I will fix that~ love and blessings, Teri
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You're welcome. Nice job.
Comment from Gert sherwood
What a beautiful free verse poem Teri, of the beauty and wonders of all God creations, especially your vision of us to see with the chickens in your son's backyard
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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What a beautiful free verse poem Teri, of the beauty and wonders of all God creations, especially your vision of us to see with the chickens in your son's backyard
Gert
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much Gert for the great review and lovely comments. love and blessings, Teri
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You are welcome Teri
Gert
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Teri,
This is a really beautiful, down-to-earth free verse poem and a great contest entry. I love that you noticed the chicken's needs and attended to them. As always, your strong religious faith is evident in your verse. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hi Teri,
This is a really beautiful, down-to-earth free verse poem and a great contest entry. I love that you noticed the chicken's needs and attended to them. As always, your strong religious faith is evident in your verse. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the great review and very lovely and heartfelt comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Sally Law
Only one so attuned to God's sweet heart is attuned to others and the creatures around us. You are such a one. An eye for the needy was not wasted on you and a big heart fashioned to go with it.
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Only one so attuned to God's sweet heart is attuned to others and the creatures around us. You are such a one. An eye for the needy was not wasted on you and a big heart fashioned to go with it.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very lovely comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is good Teri. It's you drawing away with the Savior and King and communing with Him in the midst of all of His wondrous works and beautiful creation. I enjoyed you sharing your communion time with us Teri! Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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This is good Teri. It's you drawing away with the Savior and King and communing with Him in the midst of all of His wondrous works and beautiful creation. I enjoyed you sharing your communion time with us Teri! Well done!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very lovely comments. Blessings, Teri
Comment from royowen
It's hard to wander through the "rightness" of creation, and not marvel at the work of His hands. With our thoughts ever placed on Him, He will guide is and help us understand the magnitude of what He's done, and all out of love. He was self sufficient Irving in the void before creation. Beautifully written dear Teri, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : I can't wander to(o) far off.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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It's hard to wander through the "rightness" of creation, and not marvel at the work of His hands. With our thoughts ever placed on Him, He will guide is and help us understand the magnitude of what He's done, and all out of love. He was self sufficient Irving in the void before creation. Beautifully written dear Teri, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : I can't wander to(o) far off.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much Roy for the great review and lovely comments. Thanks for the help and I will fix that! Blessings, Teri
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Well done
