Healing The Broken
Faith poem for those who are broken.18 total reviews
Comment from Heather Knight
I like the last verse very much, Patricia. After all we are all broken one way or another.
Thanks once again for sharing your thoughts. Very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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I like the last verse very much, Patricia. After all we are all broken one way or another.
Thanks once again for sharing your thoughts. Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful write Patricia and when I read it out aloud I would suggest that the third line be: 'and when the word of God (is) spoken,' because it flows better, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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A beautiful write Patricia and when I read it out aloud I would suggest that the third line be: 'and when the word of God (is) spoken,' because it flows better, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review. Thanks for the help. Correction made.
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You?re welcome Patricia, have a wonderful day, love Dolly x
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise, well-written spiritual poem movingly tells the precious truth
about how we get to Heaven. Line 8 says WORD SAY; these words don't agree in number.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Your concise, well-written spiritual poem movingly tells the precious truth
about how we get to Heaven. Line 8 says WORD SAY; these words don't agree in number.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review. Thanks for the help, the correction has been made.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Oh, Pat, dear - this is just perfect! God took my own life when it was broken and healed me to let me serve Him! Often, when we are broken we better understand and have more empathy for people. He is still working on me too, dear soul.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Oh, Pat, dear - this is just perfect! God took my own life when it was broken and healed me to let me serve Him! Often, when we are broken we better understand and have more empathy for people. He is still working on me too, dear soul.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a truly beautiful and so very true poem you have penned about God healing the broken. I, too, my friend can say the same is true of me. I have no idea where I would be if the Lord had not brought me back from death, hell and the grave. He is working on me daily too! I am so thankful for that. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Patricia, This is a truly beautiful and so very true poem you have penned about God healing the broken. I, too, my friend can say the same is true of me. I have no idea where I would be if the Lord had not brought me back from death, hell and the grave. He is working on me daily too! I am so thankful for that. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Ben Colder
It all begins with Let us make man in our image and likeness. We go through various difficulties to mature us in Him. Jesus said" Be matured as the Father is matured, so it is step by step to we become like Him. Your write is perfect. Thanks you for sharing His word. My blessings to you.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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It all begins with Let us make man in our image and likeness. We go through various difficulties to mature us in Him. Jesus said" Be matured as the Father is matured, so it is step by step to we become like Him. Your write is perfect. Thanks you for sharing His word. My blessings to you.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
It is certainly true that things are never that badly broken that they can't be fixed given the right circumstances, belief or faith.
The piece flows very well and lovely sentiments expressed.
GMG
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Hi there,
It is certainly true that things are never that badly broken that they can't be fixed given the right circumstances, belief or faith.
The piece flows very well and lovely sentiments expressed.
GMG
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sasha
I do not mean to be rude, but I just cannot imagine that you would still need any more work done. You come across as a true believer and someone that has dedicated her life to God. This is intended to be a compliment.
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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I do not mean to be rude, but I just cannot imagine that you would still need any more work done. You come across as a true believer and someone that has dedicated her life to God. This is intended to be a compliment.
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review. Believe me that I still have some areas in my life that the Lord is working on.
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Okay, I'll take your word for it.
