Healing The Broken
Faith poem for those who are broken.18 total reviews
Comment from sfharper
Lovely, kind poem for those who are broken and find wisdom. It uses such lovely language and shows such a nice prayer. Enjoyed both the photo and the poem. Good work.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
Lovely, kind poem for those who are broken and find wisdom. It uses such lovely language and shows such a nice prayer. Enjoyed both the photo and the poem. Good work.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Mistydawn
You're so right. I can't tell you how many times I've heard, read about how people use their bad experiences to help others struggling with problems similar to theirs. The poem is very well-written, interesting, your great word choice, description gets your message across nicely, great job.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
You're so right. I can't tell you how many times I've heard, read about how people use their bad experiences to help others struggling with problems similar to theirs. The poem is very well-written, interesting, your great word choice, description gets your message across nicely, great job.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Treischel
A biblically based and biographically based spiritual message that touches on brokenness, done in abab rhymed Quatrain, followed by abcb rhymed Quatrain with a closing unrhymed Couplet, is nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
A biblically based and biographically based spiritual message that touches on brokenness, done in abab rhymed Quatrain, followed by abcb rhymed Quatrain with a closing unrhymed Couplet, is nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Patricia. Your poem is well written and rhymed. I agree with the theme and its encouraging message of healing, especially with the final two lines. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
Hi Patricia. Your poem is well written and rhymed. I agree with the theme and its encouraging message of healing, especially with the final two lines. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review. I hope your eyes are recovering well.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
So very true. I have seen or heard testimonies of those who's lives seemed unfixable, but God can do anything and does. Really well done Pat. Encouraging too. Rox
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
So very true. I have seen or heard testimonies of those who's lives seemed unfixable, but God can do anything and does. Really well done Pat. Encouraging too. Rox
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Thank you Patricia, for sharing your gem and reminding us to look to God; that He can heal and mend us and that He sent Jesus to shed His blood as remission for our sins. This is timely.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
Thank you Patricia, for sharing your gem and reminding us to look to God; that He can heal and mend us and that He sent Jesus to shed His blood as remission for our sins. This is timely.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
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You're welcome, Pat!
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
Thanks for the encouraging words because we all feel broken at times and in need of repair. If God can't do it, who can? I like the picture you used of the person praying, broken in pieces as I've never seen one like this before. I appreciate this after a hard day.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
Thanks for the encouraging words because we all feel broken at times and in need of repair. If God can't do it, who can? I like the picture you used of the person praying, broken in pieces as I've never seen one like this before. I appreciate this after a hard day.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Pat,
Again, your lovely verse demonstrates your strong religious beliefs. Faith has surely helped a lot of people to heal. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
Hi Pat,
Again, your lovely verse demonstrates your strong religious beliefs. Faith has surely helped a lot of people to heal. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written spiritual poem with an uplifting message that there is always hope for the ones who are broken and messed up. There is one who really cares about those and will lift them up.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
A very well-written spiritual poem with an uplifting message that there is always hope for the ones who are broken and messed up. There is one who really cares about those and will lift them up.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! Loved how you wove in John 3:16 into your reassuring poem that God can heal all our brokenness and can even use us to bless others and encourage them to faith.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
Amen! Loved how you wove in John 3:16 into your reassuring poem that God can heal all our brokenness and can even use us to bless others and encourage them to faith.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.