The White Rose
Elegant is it's beauty............8 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully done and a fine entry for the Loop Poetry Comtest. I love the creamy white rose you chose for your crowing effort. It is striking.
All my best,
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Beautifully done and a fine entry for the Loop Poetry Comtest. I love the creamy white rose you chose for your crowing effort. It is striking.
All my best,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Hi Sally, thank you for the excellent review and you sweet comments.
Have a great weekend!.........Maria
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Absolutely gorgeous! This is a perfect Loop poem describing the 'breathtaking beauty' of the 'white rose.' I particularly love the last line :) Wonderful contest entry!!
Gale
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Absolutely gorgeous! This is a perfect Loop poem describing the 'breathtaking beauty' of the 'white rose.' I particularly love the last line :) Wonderful contest entry!!
Gale
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments, So
glad you enjoyed the poem. Have a good rest of the week. Maria
Comment from Ballad man
Lovely words make a beautiful picture. The picture is so wonderful too. I love all roses, but the white rose is my Favourite. I enjoyed the read, My friend....Pete
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Lovely words make a beautiful picture. The picture is so wonderful too. I love all roses, but the white rose is my Favourite. I enjoyed the read, My friend....Pete
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comment.
So glad you enjoyed the poem. harmony13
Comment from JudyE
My heart sinks when I read 'loop poem'. I find many of them contrived but this works very well, maybe because it's just the three lines. I like the rhythm too. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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My heart sinks when I read 'loop poem'. I find many of them contrived but this works very well, maybe because it's just the three lines. I like the rhythm too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments.
Hope you had a great day!
Comment from moongirlwriter
You know, every word is perfectly written so you've followed the contest rules well. Unfortunately, you've chosen this amazing artwork that outshines your writing. :)
I hope you understand. . .that rose is exquisite.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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You know, every word is perfectly written so you've followed the contest rules well. Unfortunately, you've chosen this amazing artwork that outshines your writing. :)
I hope you understand. . .that rose is exquisite.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments.
I definitely understand - the artwork is exceptional, Hope you had a great
day!
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and lovely short loop poem you have penned. It looks like you met all the criteria for the contest. You used very beautiful imagery from the picture of the rose and your nice words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings Teri
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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This is a very beautiful and lovely short loop poem you have penned. It looks like you met all the criteria for the contest. You used very beautiful imagery from the picture of the rose and your nice words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings Teri
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much Teri for the excellent review and your kind words.
So glad you enjoyed the poem. Have a good rest of the week! Maria
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Thank you so much Maria. I hope you have a great and blessed one too!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Harmony,
Ooooh - I love white roses! That is certainly a gorgeous image you've displayed and it complements your beautiful words quite effectively. This is a great contest entry. Best of luck in the competition and thank you for sharing your work. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Hi Harmony,
Ooooh - I love white roses! That is certainly a gorgeous image you've displayed and it complements your beautiful words quite effectively. This is a great contest entry. Best of luck in the competition and thank you for sharing your work. Jan :-)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional comments.
I am so glad you enjoyed the poem. Maria
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great little poem for the contest, Harmony. I love the picture. Your words read smoothly with a great message. The repeated words fit in seamlessly. The color scheme is super. Good job and best wishes. Jan
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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This is a great little poem for the contest, Harmony. I love the picture. Your words read smoothly with a great message. The repeated words fit in seamlessly. The color scheme is super. Good job and best wishes. Jan
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind words.
Have a good rest of the week!...?.Maria
