Doors, Windows and More
Faith poetry15 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Patricia. He promises to be with us right up to the end and beyond, doesn't he? We are usually the ones who abandon him, not the other way around. I know you and I are on the same page. Nicely done poem of faith. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hi Patricia. He promises to be with us right up to the end and beyond, doesn't he? We are usually the ones who abandon him, not the other way around. I know you and I are on the same page. Nicely done poem of faith. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Treischel
You maintain a stoic and proper spiritual attitude as you come into the final stages of life, in prayer and praise, as the lord leads the way. The metaphors of doors and windows are excellent.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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You maintain a stoic and proper spiritual attitude as you come into the final stages of life, in prayer and praise, as the lord leads the way. The metaphors of doors and windows are excellent.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the windows of opportunities that come our way when we serve the Lord, when the one door closes another will be open wider with even more possiblities.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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A very well-written poem about the windows of opportunities that come our way when we serve the Lord, when the one door closes another will be open wider with even more possiblities.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I hope your Journey doesn't end for a good while yet. You would be greatly missed. But being in heaven compared to living here on earth, that's kind of a no brainer. =} The Lord has our days numbered. Well done dear, as always. Rox
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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I hope your Journey doesn't end for a good while yet. You would be greatly missed. But being in heaven compared to living here on earth, that's kind of a no brainer. =} The Lord has our days numbered. Well done dear, as always. Rox
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from Irish Rain
I love this.
It speaks to all of us growing
older, and hopefully the young will
also learn from it.
There is such peace in God's assurance...
we have a home in Heaven.
Beautiful,
Blessings...
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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I love this.
It speaks to all of us growing
older, and hopefully the young will
also learn from it.
There is such peace in God's assurance...
we have a home in Heaven.
Beautiful,
Blessings...
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely review..
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You're welcome...thank YOU for sharing your faith!
Comment from Mistydawn
What a beautiful inspirational poem. Your great word choice made it easy for the reader to feel your strong faith. I love how you asked for strength, guidance throught every new journey.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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What a beautiful inspirational poem. Your great word choice made it easy for the reader to feel your strong faith. I love how you asked for strength, guidance throught every new journey.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely review..
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, until I noticed the rhymes, I thought this was for the Free Verse challenge about "windows" but you've included everything from doors, windows and the journey of life. Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Oh, until I noticed the rhymes, I thought this was for the Free Verse challenge about "windows" but you've included everything from doors, windows and the journey of life. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely review..
Comment from judiverse
This is optimistic an sincere in tone. There are still opportunities at every stage of life. Excellent rhyme. Your poem is one or praise to the Lord for helping you make it through each day, as there are sure to be trials. judi
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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This is optimistic an sincere in tone. There are still opportunities at every stage of life. Excellent rhyme. Your poem is one or praise to the Lord for helping you make it through each day, as there are sure to be trials. judi
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely review..
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, Patricia this is a lovely prayer of the day for any day of the week -- great just for printing and putting on the wall near where a person gets ready in the morning... :) ;) Thanx for sharing with all of us! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Oh, Patricia this is a lovely prayer of the day for any day of the week -- great just for printing and putting on the wall near where a person gets ready in the morning... :) ;) Thanx for sharing with all of us! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely review..
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your journey of life has not finished yet Patricia, and may all your days be free from worry and strife. I like the positivity of the windows and doors being open for opportunities, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Your journey of life has not finished yet Patricia, and may all your days be free from worry and strife. I like the positivity of the windows and doors being open for opportunities, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely review..
