Of Nature Sing
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "The Course of Seasons"A book about the natural world.
2 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. I think the loop poem concept really worked for this poem and its message. Good imagery and flow as well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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This was a good read. I think the loop poem concept really worked for this poem and its message. Good imagery and flow as well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you! I really tried to get it to work in this format. I truly appreciate your comments, the rating and the good luck wishes!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your loop poem flows well, Mystery Author. It doesn't seem to be hindered by the repeat of the last word of the previous line. Good job on the rhyme, the smooth flow, and the great message of life expressed in seasons. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Your loop poem flows well, Mystery Author. It doesn't seem to be hindered by the repeat of the last word of the previous line. Good job on the rhyme, the smooth flow, and the great message of life expressed in seasons. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thank you! I truly appreciate your comments, and of course the rating and best wishes!
