Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I so agree, having support is everything and when it's with those you love then it means so much and certainly lightens the burden, wise words in this Lune June, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019

Thanks, Dolly, for your empathetic and insightful review.

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Delightful combo of illustration and verse you have shared.

Your imagery of 'joining together' and 'lightens the burden' is excellent phrasing. Love is all in the hands and heart!

Minor suggestion: for these short Lune entries, consider centering your next and raise the font size a bit. Italics is your choice. I like that the space gets filled (-:

My guess is that your presentation will get favorable support from many FS reviewers.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019

Thanks for reading and for your suggestions, as always, I appreciate it.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi June,

This is a lovely lune and a great contest entry. Your visual.presention complements your verse perfectly. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019

Thank you for your empathetic and insightful review.

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a good write. I think you really captured how people need to be hands on with helping others instead of just talking about it. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019

Appreciate your taking the time to read and share your sentiments.

Comment from Randa Dayle

Excellent

Very nice poem. I have not seen a Lune poem before. I think your poem fits the 5-3-5 syllables well. I like the picture with it as well. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019

Appreciate your taking the time to read and share your sentiments.