Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao Mystery poet ,

I gave you your third vote.
For a couple of years I had a blackbird visit my garden at 700 m.

I loved it's glossy black feathers and that dark orange beak was cool ..

He became quite daring and would fly in and jump very close to me but he always had a watchful eye on me.

He was even cheeky with my cat..teasing him..

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019

Thanks for that 3rd vote much appreciated ! Loved your description zanya

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Like both picture and verse

'Warbles' is so descriptive.

You got in your colors: light, black, and golden!

Good luck in this writing prompt contest.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019

Loved your review zanya

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

I liked the write. I could almost hear the blackbird sing when I read this. Good flow and word choices for the form. Nice job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019

Great review zanya

Comment from DeborahWrite

Excellent

Dear Author,
I enjoyed your Lune Poem at dawn. Your picture takes me to the setting and this bird seems so stoic! I love the word choice or "golden timbre"! Lovely!
My best in this contest,
Deborah

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019

What a great review !zanya

reply by DeborahWrite on 20-Mar-2019

Thank you :)