Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL! Bring on the space part of the journey...my knees are unhappy with gravity these days...lol!! ;) :) What a lovely Terza-Rima, Trisha, that when paired with that stunning artwork really sings out the praises you've written!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019

Thanks Yvette, I appreciate your supportive review.
Hugs, Trisha
I?m not Fan Storying for a little while, take care.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

What a nice poem Bucketlist
to remind us that as we get older that our lifetime has been loaned by God's good grace and
Embellished by family, love, and romance.

Gert

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019

Yes, I?m 71, and I?m more aware than ever of the finality of life,. Medical challenges seem to be frequent. Enjoy every day!
Hugs, Trisha

reply by Gert sherwood on 07-Oct-2019

I agree Bucketlist the older I get another medical challenge to combat.
Gert

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

AMEN! That is the harmonious and eternal plane we are all aiming for as best as we can. This is a well penned Terza Rima and a most uplifting and enjoyable reading experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019

Thanks so much, I?m glad you enjoyed the poem. I am taking a break from FS for a little while, take care
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned about life's cycle. You used very good descriptive words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Thanks Teri, I?m tidying up my nook, while I take a break. Thanks for reviewing. I?m hoping my challenges resolve soon
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from NickieT

Excellent

This poem is very well crafted - with a clear start and a solid ending that brings it full circle and leaves the reader feeling satisfied. I particularly appreciated the idea of a return to cosmic space. =)

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Thank you, Nickie! I appreciated your positive review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Interesting poem about the passage of time and the cycle of life. "Cosmic space "is an interesting phrase that you used. Thanks for sharing this poem. Bill

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Thanks so much Bill for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha