Comment from JudyE

Excellent

This is a clever post. I wasn't sure what was going to happen until the very end which is a good way for a story to finish. I can't suggest any improvements. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019

Thanks, Judy.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, this is the sweetest children's story I've read on here, feeling sorry for a carrrot when I eat them daily is a tough one! A joy to read, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019

Thanks, Dolly.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Maria,

Wa ha ha ha ha! This is terrific! You are very gifted at writing these short stories that draw your reader in, then you take them to a delightful, humorous ending. As always, your writing is impeccable. Thank you so much for sharing your great work with us. Jan :-)

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019

Thanks, Jan.