Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your words here will help others because we do need to love ourselves and not see the negative points. I once worked with a girl who was quite voluptuous and she celebrated her curves and was proud and dressed to the nines every day and had a great smile, nothing phased her and she was a great person to work with, she exuded sunshine, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019

Thank you. although there are things she touched upon that he has, she didn't want to stoop to his level, she is basically saying. don't judge a book by it's cover, it's about how you feel about yourself. Thanks for understanding my point.

Comment from moongirlwriter

Good

This poem is really a tit for tat and does have its place. I would while everything said is possibly true. . .the best part of the poem is the title. Love yourself. It's pretty well written with a couple of problems with meter. My suggestion would be to have someone else read it out loud so you can see how the flow works and doesn't.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019

It maybe a little tit for tat as you call it, but the point is no one is flawless and if you stay true to yourself and if you have confidence, no one can ever put you down with their insults. As long as she is pleasing to herself. Thanks for the criticism.

reply by moongirlwriter on 18-Mar-2019

I totally agree. . .love yourself!