"Amazing!" #1. 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Discovery of Me?"New Book of Poetry.
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Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned and always filled with with such depth of heart, soul and spirit. I don't see you as much as I used to when I first joined FanStory. I hope you are well. I recently wrote about my greatest loss, the loss of my granddaughter Esther Grace. I thought of you and your great loss of Jason, and your wife. I came by to say hello and wish you well today. I continue to pray for your healing and comfort. All my organs are donated by the way. I'm old, but they still work.
All my best,
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Beautifully penned and always filled with with such depth of heart, soul and spirit. I don't see you as much as I used to when I first joined FanStory. I hope you are well. I recently wrote about my greatest loss, the loss of my granddaughter Esther Grace. I thought of you and your great loss of Jason, and your wife. I came by to say hello and wish you well today. I continue to pray for your healing and comfort. All my organs are donated by the way. I'm old, but they still work.
All my best,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much Sally Law!
Ricky...
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is such a wonderful and 'touching of the heart' write that you have penned from the viewpoint of your departed son -- to hear his life saved four and that he now hears the angels sing is a promise to all. :) :) Thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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This is such a wonderful and 'touching of the heart' write that you have penned from the viewpoint of your departed son -- to hear his life saved four and that he now hears the angels sing is a promise to all. :) :) Thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thanks Yvette for your time and review.
Dr.Ricky
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Comment from Lobber
I've never seen a poem with such courage. My works seem like drivel in comparison. Yet each are driven my the need and power to communicate.
The honesty is pivotal in making such a narrative a study in how to gain and maintain a reader's attention. In a world shock and awe we rarely find true narratives based on raw facts, real people with real commitments to real situations. The synergistic result is a power that stretch's beyond a line, a refrain or a haunting motif.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I've never seen a poem with such courage. My works seem like drivel in comparison. Yet each are driven my the need and power to communicate.
The honesty is pivotal in making such a narrative a study in how to gain and maintain a reader's attention. In a world shock and awe we rarely find true narratives based on raw facts, real people with real commitments to real situations. The synergistic result is a power that stretch's beyond a line, a refrain or a haunting motif.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thanks for your comments and review.
Dt.Ricky 102r
