Abandoned cars
No-one left to drive them home13 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
This is a topical and very moving monostich. A powerful one liner that hits home.
Your presentation suits the text perfectly.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
Hello :)
This is a topical and very moving monostich. A powerful one liner that hits home.
Your presentation suits the text perfectly.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thanks Debra.
Comment from kiwijenny
My goodness this touched me. Those poor people. I am a New Zealander but I live in Kentucky. This is a hideous crime...of the greatest evil. New Zealand was his target because it is a haven
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God bless...tears
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
My goodness this touched me. Those poor people. I am a New Zealander but I live in Kentucky. This is a hideous crime...of the greatest evil. New Zealand was his target because it is a haven
No more
God bless...tears
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thanks for reading Jen.This was inspired by a news item that I read this morning about the car park of the mosque Bing full and it really brought it home to me. It just shows that terrorist attacks are not solely about racism but about evil. Also thanks so much for the stars.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
For reasons unknown, they left their cars and now go see there are those abandoned cars outside mosque in Christchurch; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
For reasons unknown, they left their cars and now go see there are those abandoned cars outside mosque in Christchurch; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thanks for reading.