A Sip of Whiskey
The Drink Poetry10 total reviews
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Dove,
Ha ha ha! This is a great write about a drink and a funny contest entry. I'm sure this poem will fare well in the competition. Nothing here for me to suggest you consider reworking. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hi Dove,
Ha ha ha! This is a great write about a drink and a funny contest entry. I'm sure this poem will fare well in the competition. Nothing here for me to suggest you consider reworking. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Jan :-)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Dear Jan, Thanks for your comments and review. And also your good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from kiwijenny
Dove Marie you are a wonder. I never have had a whiskey sour,,,when I was a kid I mistook my dad's whiskey for my ginger ale...it was gross it burned all the way down
I'm not a drinker
God bless
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Dove Marie you are a wonder. I never have had a whiskey sour,,,when I was a kid I mistook my dad's whiskey for my ginger ale...it was gross it burned all the way down
I'm not a drinker
God bless
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Dear kiwijenny, Oops! So sorry about your mistake when you were a kid. Sometimes a had a sip of my Dad's beer. Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove
Comment from Miss Sherry
My grandma used to make me a whiskey toddy whenever I had a cold. It worked better than the doctor's medicine but soured (pun intended) me on drinking for the rest of my life.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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My grandma used to make me a whiskey toddy whenever I had a cold. It worked better than the doctor's medicine but soured (pun intended) me on drinking for the rest of my life.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Dear Miss Sherry, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from JudyE
Nice rhyming here and your poem about a whiskey sour is easy to read. I can't make any suggestions for improvement and didn't pick up any spags. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Nice rhyming here and your poem about a whiskey sour is easy to read. I can't make any suggestions for improvement and didn't pick up any spags. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Dear JudyE, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Dove, with your contest entry. I like the monorhyme of each verse. Your words flow well to tell this little story. The picture is a great pairing with your words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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You did a great job, Dove, with your contest entry. I like the monorhyme of each verse. Your words flow well to tell this little story. The picture is a great pairing with your words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Dear Jan, Thank you for comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the drinking of a whiskey sour. The only alcohol I ever had was table wine from time to time, I do not like its taste very much so I prefer not to drink anything at all.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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A very well-written poem about the drinking of a whiskey sour. The only alcohol I ever had was table wine from time to time, I do not like its taste very much so I prefer not to drink anything at all.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from moongirlwriter
cute. . .but with that said, I think stanza number three can use a little editing to match the others. As I was reading it, I discovered that a few words could be left out and actually attain the same meaning. . .but of course, it's your poem and you prefer the poem this way. Okay. :)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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cute. . .but with that said, I think stanza number three can use a little editing to match the others. As I was reading it, I discovered that a few words could be left out and actually attain the same meaning. . .but of course, it's your poem and you prefer the poem this way. Okay. :)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Dear moongirlwriter, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The whiskey certainly gave you a glow here and we used to drink it in the cold winter to warm us from the inside, your first stanza is my favourite, whiskey is a little risky! love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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The whiskey certainly gave you a glow here and we used to drink it in the cold winter to warm us from the inside, your first stanza is my favourite, whiskey is a little risky! love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from moonsunrise
This is a great entry for the Drink Poetry contest. I could feel every emotion with each sip. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Kind regards. By the way, great imagery as well.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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This is a great entry for the Drink Poetry contest. I could feel every emotion with each sip. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Kind regards. By the way, great imagery as well.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Dear moonsunrise, Thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from 24chas
This was a good piece. I really enjoyed the flow with it and the imagery of this one. Alcohol does have a way of changing people. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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This was a good piece. I really enjoyed the flow with it and the imagery of this one. Alcohol does have a way of changing people. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Dear 24chas, Thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes. Dove
