Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a good read, Val Crisson. The piece had a good flow to it and touched me as being peaceful and calm. Nice job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019

Thank you for the lovely review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a beautiful Haiku filled with pink roses of ancient ponds as Autumn looms, there's sadness in these words as petals float away and summer dies, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019

Thank you for the lovely review, Dolly. It means a great deal to me Val

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A great entry in this haiku contest. One can see these floating on the surface of pools all over Asia, but not so common in the western world. A beautifully written haiku, good luck, well done Val, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019

This such a lovely and encouraging review, Roy. I thank you so much for your support. Val

reply by royowen on 15-Mar-2019

My pleasure Val