Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

I admire the way you tell a story through a strand of pearls, each one is meaningful and strung on the string of life... beautiful way to portray life and love.
Judy

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019

Hello, Judy, thank you very much for the comments. Thank you.

Melissa

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

This poem is very lovely and well-written. The theme is movingly conveyed through a bittersweet tone because of the joy and love, loss and sadness. Each pearl
symbolizes something in life--very effective.

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019

Hello, Janice. Thanks for the wonderful comments.

Melissa

Comment from patcelaw

Exceptional

Melissa, this is such a beautifully worded poem of love and loss, but has the hope of reunion on the other side with the Lord.
Patricia

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019

Thanks so very much, Patricia. I am glad you understood the balance of gratefulness for a wonderful life and the pain of walking alone for a season.

Melissa

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Wow, another fine and outstanding poem. You are in the zone, dear girl! A pearl necklace is such a wonderful word picture for life and each piece fitted together to form the beauty is bestows upon the wearer. My mom willed me her pearl necklace and when I wear it, I remember her.
All my best,
Sal xo

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019

Hi, Sal... thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it. :)

Melissa