Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Painful Memories"My Collection of Love Poetry
8 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- your formatting in this mix of free verse and some rhyme really hits home how there once was a relationship and belonging here, but now it is gone .... heartbreaking. Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Wow -- your formatting in this mix of free verse and some rhyme really hits home how there once was a relationship and belonging here, but now it is gone .... heartbreaking. Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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That?s my morose side!!! I write whatever my heart says to my pen!!! Thanks Y.M for a complimentarreview
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Bucket,
WOW - This is a really sad poem, my friend. It is very well written and a great contest entry. Good luck and thanks for sharing your work. Jan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Hi Bucket,
WOW - This is a really sad poem, my friend. It is very well written and a great contest entry. Good luck and thanks for sharing your work. Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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You?re very kind! I am glad you enjoyed the sad!
Hugs, Trisha
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Hi Trisha, My pleasure! Jan :-)
Comment from Gail Denham
Well done - a poem of deep despair and loss. The picture you chose sure supports your poem. Is this a certain form - or just something you used to create your poem?
The "bare room now jailers" - good line. Makes me think of Gentleman Jim Reeves and his "Four Walls" - he's one of my favorites. You're prob. too young to know these songs.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Well done - a poem of deep despair and loss. The picture you chose sure supports your poem. Is this a certain form - or just something you used to create your poem?
The "bare room now jailers" - good line. Makes me think of Gentleman Jim Reeves and his "Four Walls" - he's one of my favorites. You're prob. too young to know these songs.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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I don?t think so! I?m 70. The image was chosen for the ?picture this challenge? club. The image each month, is open to interpretation. I?m glad you enjoyed my version. Thanks for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, I have not visited the site in a few months. It is so nice to return to read this poem. Feelings of sadness, regret and loss oozes from the computer screen.
This poem would have been a great entry for the mirror contest as well.
Thank you for sharing raw emotions. Hopefully, writing this poem was therapeutic for you if this poem is non-fictional.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Wow, I have not visited the site in a few months. It is so nice to return to read this poem. Feelings of sadness, regret and loss oozes from the computer screen.
This poem would have been a great entry for the mirror contest as well.
Thank you for sharing raw emotions. Hopefully, writing this poem was therapeutic for you if this poem is non-fictional.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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This was an ekphrastic interpretation. I wrote as the emotions came to me from the picture. I?m really happy that the emotions had impact for you. Welcome back and thank you for your great review and stars.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and an excellent interpretation of the picture. We can see the place was a wonderful place before it is ruined. There are many scenarios that could make the detoriorate until the current condition.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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A very well-written poem and an excellent interpretation of the picture. We can see the place was a wonderful place before it is ruined. There are many scenarios that could make the detoriorate until the current condition.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Memories are mixed when you miss someone, but I tend to remember the happy ones to keep positive, this is a melocholy write Trisha, evoking much emotion, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Memories are mixed when you miss someone, but I tend to remember the happy ones to keep positive, this is a melocholy write Trisha, evoking much emotion, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review. My versatility is showing!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Lobber
Your content matches the challenge of writing a Romance poem. The images you've created (for example: empty mirror, rotting floors, bare walls) allow the reader to anxiously participate. Each section floats easily into the next creating a tight package that's painful on the eyes and ears for the reader. I also also like your choice of graphic/photo.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Your content matches the challenge of writing a Romance poem. The images you've created (for example: empty mirror, rotting floors, bare walls) allow the reader to anxiously participate. Each section floats easily into the next creating a tight package that's painful on the eyes and ears for the reader. I also also like your choice of graphic/photo.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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My goodness gracious Lobber! What a great review and stars you honor me with. This image is given to all the challenge club ?picture this? members and we each interpret the scene how we want to write about it. Thank you again
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Bucketlist. The emotion and pain are very strong in it and the words are powerful reminders of what used to be. Great job of writing.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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This was a good read, Bucketlist. The emotion and pain are very strong in it and the words are powerful reminders of what used to be. Great job of writing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
