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A 5-7-5 Contest Entry7 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
This is a lovely entry for the contest.
Lovely imagery - I can almost smell the roses!
Sound syllable count and beautifully presented.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
Hello :)
This is a lovely entry for the contest.
Lovely imagery - I can almost smell the roses!
Sound syllable count and beautifully presented.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review on this one, Debra -- always so good to hear from you! ;) ;)
Comment from RodG
My father, who had rose gardens in every home he owned, was also a morning person who often said--almost verbatim--the same words as your poem. Thanks for sharing. Beautifully said. Rod
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
My father, who had rose gardens in every home he owned, was also a morning person who often said--almost verbatim--the same words as your poem. Thanks for sharing. Beautifully said. Rod
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your lovely review, Rod. So glad that you enjoyed it!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This short poem is infused with fragrance and sweet smells with a breath of fresh air whistling through the words, a magical write, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
This short poem is infused with fragrance and sweet smells with a breath of fresh air whistling through the words, a magical write, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review, Dolly. So glad that you enjoyed it!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Ooooh - this is absolutely lovely! I'm with you on this one -- there's nothing quite like the sweet smell of fresh roses early in the dewy morning. Your visual presentation is as lovely as your verse and this should be a strong contender. Best of luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
Hi Contest Author,
Ooooh - this is absolutely lovely! I'm with you on this one -- there's nothing quite like the sweet smell of fresh roses early in the dewy morning. Your visual presentation is as lovely as your verse and this should be a strong contender. Best of luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review, Jan. So glad that you enjoyed it!
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. I really liked the beauty of the words in their simplicity and the message. The picture really enhanced your words. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
This was a good read. I really liked the beauty of the words in their simplicity and the message. The picture really enhanced your words. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review. So glad that you enjoyed it!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ohhh yes! You are sooo right about that! That is a gorgeous and refreshing scent. Even that photo you found is perfect. Good luck in the contest. xo
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
Ohhh yes! You are sooo right about that! That is a gorgeous and refreshing scent. Even that photo you found is perfect. Good luck in the contest. xo
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review, Rachelle. So glad that you enjoyed it!
Comment from Mark D. R.
I too like this 575 format.
Your last line is the best of the three if I had to choose. Your selected illustration matches perfectly your text.
Best wishes in this competition.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
I too like this 575 format.
Your last line is the best of the three if I had to choose. Your selected illustration matches perfectly your text.
Best wishes in this competition.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review, Mark. I am glad you liked it.