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Entertaining in the Kasbah

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Comment from Debra White
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Hello :)
This is a fun entry for the contest.
Perfect syllable count and well presented. I enjoyed the humour and I like that your poem rhymes too!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thanks Debra. I am so glad that you appreciated the humour. Jen.x
Comment from LisaMay
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hahaha, culturally insensitive! I like it (your poem, not necessarily the music). Is that Turkish? or Arabic? maybe people would like it better when they got used to it. Our Western music can sound godawful too.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    I ,ove your review LisaMay. Thank you so much.
reply by LisaMay on 15-Mar-2019
    Actually, I just noticed you mentioned the Kasbah, so I figure it must be in Morocco.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    Possibly. I chose it mainly because of the look on the guy's face. I think it's hilarious. X
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    Possibly. I chose it mainly because of the look on the guy's face. I think it's hilarious. X
reply by LisaMay on 15-Mar-2019
    Isn't it terrific to find a really suitable picture for our poems! It's the finishing touch... sometimes even the starting inspiration.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    Yes. It is great. Unfortunatley I'm not clued up enough to add pictures from the internet. I have to stick for FanArt but there are plenty to choose from and I love scrolling through them.
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Haha - this is cute. With just a few selected words, your poem is saying a lot. Love that red background behind the white text. It really pops. Regards, Lou

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Thanks Lou. So glad you like it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, this made me smile because we have street musicians in my town and some of them sound terrible! He he he, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from brenda faye curtis
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This is a good poem and a perfect picture to go with it. Maybe that look on his face is the result of his listeners running away when the didn't appreciate his style.
They must be tone-deaf! :)

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
    I chose the picture for the look on his face. So glad you liked it. Thanks a lot for the witty review. Love it.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 13-Mar-2019
    You're most welcome. :)
Comment from 24chas
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This was a funny read. I liked the flow of the piece and the self-deprecating humor. This one made me smile. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
    Thanks Chas so glad you like it.
Comment from kiwijenny
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My music has no style...because it is non existent...so there you are way ahead of the game in my book.some like to listen and smile others run a mile...have you tried the bagpipes?
The tuba?
This made me smile
God bless

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
    Thanks for reviewing Jen.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Okay, humor folded into the 'I Love' theme...you certainly can't beat the combination! :) A great offering for this contest -- good luck at the polls! :) :)

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
    Thanks Yvette