I love to play my instrument
Entertaining in the Kasbah8 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
This is a fun entry for the contest.
Perfect syllable count and well presented. I enjoyed the humour and I like that your poem rhymes too!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
Hello :)
This is a fun entry for the contest.
Perfect syllable count and well presented. I enjoyed the humour and I like that your poem rhymes too!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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Thanks Debra. I am so glad that you appreciated the humour. Jen.x
Comment from LisaMay
hahaha, culturally insensitive! I like it (your poem, not necessarily the music). Is that Turkish? or Arabic? maybe people would like it better when they got used to it. Our Western music can sound godawful too.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
hahaha, culturally insensitive! I like it (your poem, not necessarily the music). Is that Turkish? or Arabic? maybe people would like it better when they got used to it. Our Western music can sound godawful too.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
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I ,ove your review LisaMay. Thank you so much.
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Actually, I just noticed you mentioned the Kasbah, so I figure it must be in Morocco.
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Possibly. I chose it mainly because of the look on the guy's face. I think it's hilarious. X
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Possibly. I chose it mainly because of the look on the guy's face. I think it's hilarious. X
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Isn't it terrific to find a really suitable picture for our poems! It's the finishing touch... sometimes even the starting inspiration.
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Yes. It is great. Unfortunatley I'm not clued up enough to add pictures from the internet. I have to stick for FanArt but there are plenty to choose from and I love scrolling through them.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Haha - this is cute. With just a few selected words, your poem is saying a lot. Love that red background behind the white text. It really pops. Regards, Lou
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
Haha - this is cute. With just a few selected words, your poem is saying a lot. Love that red background behind the white text. It really pops. Regards, Lou
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thanks Lou. So glad you like it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile because we have street musicians in my town and some of them sound terrible! He he he, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
He he he, this made me smile because we have street musicians in my town and some of them sound terrible! He he he, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This is a good poem and a perfect picture to go with it. Maybe that look on his face is the result of his listeners running away when the didn't appreciate his style.
They must be tone-deaf! :)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
This is a good poem and a perfect picture to go with it. Maybe that look on his face is the result of his listeners running away when the didn't appreciate his style.
They must be tone-deaf! :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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I chose the picture for the look on his face. So glad you liked it. Thanks a lot for the witty review. Love it.
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You're most welcome. :)
Comment from 24chas
This was a funny read. I liked the flow of the piece and the self-deprecating humor. This one made me smile. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
This was a funny read. I liked the flow of the piece and the self-deprecating humor. This one made me smile. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thanks Chas so glad you like it.
Comment from kiwijenny
My music has no style...because it is non existent...so there you are way ahead of the game in my book.some like to listen and smile others run a mile...have you tried the bagpipes?
The tuba?
This made me smile
God bless
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
My music has no style...because it is non existent...so there you are way ahead of the game in my book.some like to listen and smile others run a mile...have you tried the bagpipes?
The tuba?
This made me smile
God bless
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thanks for reviewing Jen.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay, humor folded into the 'I Love' theme...you certainly can't beat the combination! :) A great offering for this contest -- good luck at the polls! :) :)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
Okay, humor folded into the 'I Love' theme...you certainly can't beat the combination! :) A great offering for this contest -- good luck at the polls! :) :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thanks Yvette