The Other Door
free verse20 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A positive write and of course we hope that doors open for us and your free verse is full of hopefulness and faith, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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A positive write and of course we hope that doors open for us and your free verse is full of hopefulness and faith, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful free verse that captures the moment a troubled soul steps from the cold of reality into the light and warmth of what waits beyond...thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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A beautiful free verse that captures the moment a troubled soul steps from the cold of reality into the light and warmth of what waits beyond...thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you, for the lovely review;
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about the darkness where we often find ourselves captive. We have to take a chance and exit the dark room and hopefully find a door that opens into the light.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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A very well-written free verse poem about the darkness where we often find ourselves captive. We have to take a chance and exit the dark room and hopefully find a door that opens into the light.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for this lovely review, as there are so few worth reading
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Val,
Ooooh - I really like the positive message in your poem. It sounds as if she may be coming out of a major depressive episode. This is a great contest entry and should do well in the competition. Best of luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hi Val,
Ooooh - I really like the positive message in your poem. It sounds as if she may be coming out of a major depressive episode. This is a great contest entry and should do well in the competition. Best of luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the lovely review. Val
Comment from Aiona
I don't normally gravitate towards free verse, but this one has structure if not rhyme or meter. The first three lines deal with darkness and despair, and then the next three lines have progressed to the opposite - light and hope. Metaphor I guess is what poetry is about, even when it doesn't rhyme. A painting with words.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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I don't normally gravitate towards free verse, but this one has structure if not rhyme or meter. The first three lines deal with darkness and despair, and then the next three lines have progressed to the opposite - light and hope. Metaphor I guess is what poetry is about, even when it doesn't rhyme. A painting with words.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you for this very intelligent review, and free verse does not require rhyme or meter. None the less, I loved this review.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Hope is eternal. Dark and light as good and evil. I enjoyed reading the poem. Excellent color combinations. I wish you luck in the poetry contest. Oops need more characters to review.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Hope is eternal. Dark and light as good and evil. I enjoyed reading the poem. Excellent color combinations. I wish you luck in the poetry contest. Oops need more characters to review.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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What?? More characters to review????? None the less, thank you for the review
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I couldn't send the review until I was at 150 or more characters. LOL
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Val Crisson. I like the flow to it and the positive message you had in it. Good rhythm as well in the form you used. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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This was a good read, Val Crisson. I like the flow to it and the positive message you had in it. Good rhythm as well in the form you used. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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I really like this review, as it is intelligent and sounds like reviewer "knows his stuff" I was going for a message as well as alliteration and other stuff. Thank you for noticing. Val Crisson
Comment from l.raven
HI Val, how have you been sweet girl ???...I hope all is well with you...
you know what they say...God never closes one door...without opening another....it's a wonderful feeling going from the dark side...to a light side...depression is an awful feeling...very well written my sweet friend...and your picture perrrfect...love your poem...love you...xxoo
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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HI Val, how have you been sweet girl ???...I hope all is well with you...
you know what they say...God never closes one door...without opening another....it's a wonderful feeling going from the dark side...to a light side...depression is an awful feeling...very well written my sweet friend...and your picture perrrfect...love your poem...love you...xxoo
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Love you too, Linda. I always can count on your support, even though I haven't been writing "de nada" lately. I've just got to make more time for it, and we have been traveling so much. You know the bucket list thing. I hope you are well and happy. Thank you so much for the lovely review. Hugs Me
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Hi Val, it won't be long and I will be on the road again...it is so good to see you...and you sweet girl are always welcome...big hugs back at you...love you...xxoo
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this free verse poem. you presented an excellent image of coming out of the darkness into the light. isn't that what we all appreciate when that happens.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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I like this free verse poem. you presented an excellent image of coming out of the darkness into the light. isn't that what we all appreciate when that happens.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Beyond the Darkness, finds the individual emerging from her oppressive world and finding that the real life is waiting with promise and growth.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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This free verse, Beyond the Darkness, finds the individual emerging from her oppressive world and finding that the real life is waiting with promise and growth.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you
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