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Comment from SLMorrical
This is a wonderful entry into the contest. This flows very well. I understand the whispers of god. Working as a Hospice Nurse, I hear many of patients talk about seeing Angels and hearing God as the time comes closer. I have also heard family members talk about it is God's plan. I will also add that the patient that believes and has faith in something/God they pass more peaceful than the ones that don't. This is very good. I wish I could give you 6 stars, but my allotment is out. Good luck in the contest. Very well done.
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This is a wonderful entry into the contest. This flows very well. I understand the whispers of god. Working as a Hospice Nurse, I hear many of patients talk about seeing Angels and hearing God as the time comes closer. I have also heard family members talk about it is God's plan. I will also add that the patient that believes and has faith in something/God they pass more peaceful than the ones that don't. This is very good. I wish I could give you 6 stars, but my allotment is out. Good luck in the contest. Very well done.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing how thankful you are for the wonderful life God has given you.
Your poem certainly meets the requirements of your contest. I wish you the best of luck,
~Mustang Patty~
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing how thankful you are for the wonderful life God has given you.
Your poem certainly meets the requirements of your contest. I wish you the best of luck,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from l.raven
Hi Al, God is trying to get His words out to us all...we make the choice to listen or not...your story is very well told...I wouldn't change a this...well expressed...very wel written...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Al, God is trying to get His words out to us all...we make the choice to listen or not...your story is very well told...I wouldn't change a this...well expressed...very wel written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You certainly have written an excellent piece for the contest and very well written and explained. You show your complete faith in God, and how you embrace His word. It is a really lovely contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra xx
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You certainly have written an excellent piece for the contest and very well written and explained. You show your complete faith in God, and how you embrace His word. It is a really lovely contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading "God Whispers to me a Life". You did a good job with this philosophical approach and addressing comments to 'Man'. It grabs the reader's attention and brings us into the piece. Good job.
Melissa
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I enjoyed reading "God Whispers to me a Life". You did a good job with this philosophical approach and addressing comments to 'Man'. It grabs the reader's attention and brings us into the piece. Good job.
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's hard to live by the Bible everyday but I'm sure many try to do so. Honestly, I just try to live a good life and maintain a real relationship with God/Jesus. Even that is hard some days. Great job
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It's hard to live by the Bible everyday but I'm sure many try to do so. Honestly, I just try to live a good life and maintain a real relationship with God/Jesus. Even that is hard some days. Great job
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from Tpa
A superb text that is truly monumental in living the words of which God intended. Beautifully written and magnificently expressed for both the believers and non-believers. A text that will give food for thought and enrich our lives.
GOOD LUCK in the contest.
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A superb text that is truly monumental in living the words of which God intended. Beautifully written and magnificently expressed for both the believers and non-believers. A text that will give food for thought and enrich our lives.
GOOD LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
Comment from susand3022
Hi Al creator litt dear, I really like your contest entry. You followed the prompts well and your message is clear and heart-felt. I have to admit... I have never been a big fan of the line about "going to your reward"... it always sounded just a little bit like bribary to me. I always thought that good deeds should be their own reward. I never thought that you should do things so that you could get into Heaven...and not go to Hell... I always thought you should just do them because they were the right thing to do. Be good, be kind, help people when you can. Give your time to others when you can. That kind of thing. Not because it's going to get you "your reward" but because it's the right thing to do.
I'm sure that's just a 'me' thing... I did like your write though... it was very nice. :)
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Hi Al creator litt dear, I really like your contest entry. You followed the prompts well and your message is clear and heart-felt. I have to admit... I have never been a big fan of the line about "going to your reward"... it always sounded just a little bit like bribary to me. I always thought that good deeds should be their own reward. I never thought that you should do things so that you could get into Heaven...and not go to Hell... I always thought you should just do them because they were the right thing to do. Be good, be kind, help people when you can. Give your time to others when you can. That kind of thing. Not because it's going to get you "your reward" but because it's the right thing to do.
I'm sure that's just a 'me' thing... I did like your write though... it was very nice. :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
Comment from Raul1
God looks all over the place so there's no mischief. If there is than they're in big trouble. I like how you talk about life. This is a very good poem. Good luck in the contest!
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God looks all over the place so there's no mischief. If there is than they're in big trouble. I like how you talk about life. This is a very good poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a wonderful story of love and life. I didn't see anything that I would change. You did a wonderful job. Have a blessed day. Shirley
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What a wonderful story of love and life. I didn't see anything that I would change. You did a wonderful job. Have a blessed day. Shirley
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
