A Summer Day on Grandpas Farm
For those who love farms36 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Mystery Poet,
I enjoyed reading your quatrains poem today. The farm experience was delihtful. I have been nostalgic about my family summer vacations to the farm. I miss my granddad a lot. He was a wonderful man to me.
I think this poem meets the contest requirements.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hello Mystery Poet,
I enjoyed reading your quatrains poem today. The farm experience was delihtful. I have been nostalgic about my family summer vacations to the farm. I miss my granddad a lot. He was a wonderful man to me.
I think this poem meets the contest requirements.
Joy xx
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hi Joy. I am delighted I could take you on a nostalgic trip back to the farm. Many thanks for sharing A SUMMER DAY. Rod
Comment from Joanna S. Blue
This poem has lovely images of gentle days spent on the farm. You feel the lulling comfort of summer days---the farm napping, a few cows grazing, the lush green grass. I especially like the grandfather's words to the little girl. It is idyllic and at the same time, real.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This poem has lovely images of gentle days spent on the farm. You feel the lulling comfort of summer days---the farm napping, a few cows grazing, the lush green grass. I especially like the grandfather's words to the little girl. It is idyllic and at the same time, real.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I am so pleased you found A SUMMER DAY both idyllic and real. I really hoped to take my readers back to an earlier time and apparently I did with you. Many thanks for your very kind praise. Rod
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, I really liked the sentiment in your poem. It made me think about times with my Nana, in the summer, and learning to mke my favorite desserts. I would be remiss however, if I didn't mention that milk, au natural, would be anything but cold... anything coming from the body would be body temperature, and as cows aren't cold blooded animals... well then... you get the idea! ;) lol
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hello Author, I really liked the sentiment in your poem. It made me think about times with my Nana, in the summer, and learning to mke my favorite desserts. I would be remiss however, if I didn't mention that milk, au natural, would be anything but cold... anything coming from the body would be body temperature, and as cows aren't cold blooded animals... well then... you get the idea! ;) lol
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hi Susan. I am delighted I could take you back in time to summer visits with Nana. And you are absolutely right about that fresh milk being warm, not cold. Many thanks for sharing A SUMMER DAY. Rod
Comment from F. Wehr3
I enjoyed your rhyming quatrains and also the story of you and your grandpa. Very nicely done, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I enjoyed your rhyming quatrains and also the story of you and your grandpa. Very nicely done, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for sharing A SUMMER DAY, Russell, and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from fm wright
Brings back my childhood days when I'd chase after my grandpa's herd of Herefords. It flows and rhymes most excellently. The picture goes with it wonderfully and I wish you the best in this contest!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Brings back my childhood days when I'd chase after my grandpa's herd of Herefords. It flows and rhymes most excellently. The picture goes with it wonderfully and I wish you the best in this contest!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I am delighted I could take you on a trip back into your childhood. Many thanks for sharing A SUMMER DAY and your kind praise. Rod
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You are more than welcome!
Comment from Gail Denham
Poignant - Nice poem. Don't we all have these memories of times gone by- of folks we miss - events that never leave our hearts. We spent many years camping with family and friends at a lake near here. Some of the happenings still make me laugh. They are sort of set in stone in my memory. Good job.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Poignant - Nice poem. Don't we all have these memories of times gone by- of folks we miss - events that never leave our hearts. We spent many years camping with family and friends at a lake near here. Some of the happenings still make me laugh. They are sort of set in stone in my memory. Good job.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hi Gail. I am so pleased I could take you back in time to a farm and a quiet visit the Speaker had with her grandfather. Many thanks for your kind praise of A SUMMER DAY. Rod
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You're sure welcome - a fun poem.
Comment from Mr. Boozle
While I did not have the cows, I can recall this experience with my grandfather just the same. I still think of how he impacted me so many years after his passing. Great poem and nice picture to match.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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While I did not have the cows, I can recall this experience with my grandfather just the same. I still think of how he impacted me so many years after his passing. Great poem and nice picture to match.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much for your very kind praise of A SUMMER DAY and those six bright stars. I am especially pleased the poem brought back memories. Rod
Comment from Heather Knight
I can relate to this because even though I've never lived in the countryside or drank milk straight from a cow, I loved my Grandpa very much and I still miss him.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I can relate to this because even though I've never lived in the countryside or drank milk straight from a cow, I loved my Grandpa very much and I still miss him.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I am delighted A SUMMER DAY could bright back memories of your own relationship with your Grandpa. Rod
Comment from Miss Sherry
I had to read through my tears. The only happy time of my life was living on Grandma's ranch with animals and my dear grandparents who loved me. This is a reverie I share with you. Very well done beautiful artwork. It fits the form chosen and I wish you luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I had to read through my tears. The only happy time of my life was living on Grandma's ranch with animals and my dear grandparents who loved me. This is a reverie I share with you. Very well done beautiful artwork. It fits the form chosen and I wish you luck in the competition.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much, Miss Sherry, for your very warm response to A SUMMER DAY. I am delighted it could stir memories of those days you spent with your own grandparents. Rod
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! You painted a fabulous scene in the country here, I loved your descriptions and you took me away into the farm land, I saw the barn, the cows and the lush green fields, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Wow! You painted a fabulous scene in the country here, I loved your descriptions and you took me away into the farm land, I saw the barn, the cows and the lush green fields, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I am so pleased A SUMMER DAY could put you there on that farm with Grandpa and the Speaker. Many thanks for sharing, Dolly.
Rod
