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War the destruction of life.
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LisaMay
Like you, I too have never understood war. It is so bleeding obvious that death and chaos never solved anything. You have portrayed this grim aspect very well in your poem with its ongoing suffering and tragedy.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
Thank you LisaMay. Yeah it's all these people of power that use war as a money maker.
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Dolly'sPoems
This is a compassionate write and it is always the children who suffer in war and what they have seen in some ways perpetuates war because it is what they come to know, a sad and powerful story here in your well written poem, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
Thank you Dolly. War is hell children are the ones that suffer.
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