View to Tomorrow
From this vantage point...30 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain poem. The ability to see tomorrow at midnight will be of course you must be awake at the time to see the following day before anyone else who may be asleep.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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A very well-written Cinquain poem. The ability to see tomorrow at midnight will be of course you must be awake at the time to see the following day before anyone else who may be asleep.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Good evening! :) So glad you enjoyed this one, Sandra! :) I had fun with it...you know me, the whole blurring the lines between fantasy and reality...LOL! :) ;) Take care and have a great remainder of the week (see you tomorrow with your next postings)! ;) Yvette
Comment from LIJ Red
Yeah, there you are, right on top of it. Then one more tick slaps tomorrow twenty four hours away....and no amount of squalling will erase half a line...two four six eight two, looks like an excellent cinquain to me...
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Yeah, there you are, right on top of it. Then one more tick slaps tomorrow twenty four hours away....and no amount of squalling will erase half a line...two four six eight two, looks like an excellent cinquain to me...
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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LOL! Your reviews always make me smile, LlJ -- thanx so much for being you! ;) ;) And thanx for stopping in to review this one -- much appreciated, sir! ;) :) Take care and have a wonderful remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mastery
This is truly outstanding poetry and a winning Cinquain in my opinion, Yvette. Your lines in the poem are thought-provoking and clear cut inaan image we all can understand. Bless you, Bob
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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This is truly outstanding poetry and a winning Cinquain in my opinion, Yvette. Your lines in the poem are thought-provoking and clear cut inaan image we all can understand. Bless you, Bob
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thanx for your wonderful comments, Bob -- they are so very appreciated! :) :) Take care and have a great remainder of the week! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is philosophical, Yvette. I try to avoid that precipice when I can. Seriously, there is a mystery to the hour of midnight. I like how you put it "twixt night and early morn." I think that you capture the mystery of the moment.
This is a sophisticated, expertly crafted cinquain. Like with everything else that you write, you could easily win.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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This is philosophical, Yvette. I try to avoid that precipice when I can. Seriously, there is a mystery to the hour of midnight. I like how you put it "twixt night and early morn." I think that you capture the mystery of the moment.
This is a sophisticated, expertly crafted cinquain. Like with everything else that you write, you could easily win.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thanx for all your wonderful words here, MQ -- this was just me with my fantasy in the real world brain on 'relax for the evening' mode...LOL! :) Glad you enjoyed...these usually don't do as well, but they are my favorite kind..:) ;) ;) Thanx for your awesome belief in me, ma'am -- it really is a boost when I'm starting to doubt myself!! :);) Take care and be sure to let me know about the decision about your mom.... fingers crossed! :) Yvette
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Mom passed. Still on hospice! They are so helpful with her.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Yvette.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your topic of midnight,
and the description that
goes with it.
-I like the ending to, as it
is possible to reflect at
this time, and at least
get a sense of the future.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Yvette.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your topic of midnight,
and the description that
goes with it.
-I like the ending to, as it
is possible to reflect at
this time, and at least
get a sense of the future.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much for stopping in on this one -- glad you enjoyed! ;) :) You know this crazy blonde just loves blurring the lines between fantasy and reality...LOL! :) ;) Take care and have a great remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette. I wasn't sure what to say about the ending, but the poem worked, as imagination is what it is all about, in my opinion!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Yvette,
Oooh - I like this one! This is a super contest entry. The visual presentation is excellent and complements your poem effectively. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Hi Yvette,
Oooh - I like this one! This is a super contest entry. The visual presentation is excellent and complements your poem effectively. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this one, Jan -- it was one of those..."I'm gonna be mysterious..." -- LOL! :) :) You know with the whole blurring the lines between fantasy and reality...! :) ;) Take care and have a great remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from country ranch writer
Twilight and midnight makes for wondering in ones mind what's next on the hat can happen before the crack of dawn. Nice work up for your poem and putting wonderment in our minds.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Twilight and midnight makes for wondering in ones mind what's next on the hat can happen before the crack of dawn. Nice work up for your poem and putting wonderment in our minds.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this one, C-R-W! :) I had fun with it...you know with the whole blurring the lines between fantasy and reality...LOL! :) ;) Take care and have a great remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
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Smiles
Comment from lyenochka
Very cool way to see that sectioned time that way in your thought-provoking cinquain, Miss Yvette! I like the "glimpse the future!" Here in the very north, sometimes it feels like the dawn shifts much closer to midnight especially in the summer.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Very cool way to see that sectioned time that way in your thought-provoking cinquain, Miss Yvette! I like the "glimpse the future!" Here in the very north, sometimes it feels like the dawn shifts much closer to midnight especially in the summer.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Been up in Michigan for week or more at time in the summer (my husband's family is from up that way) and we were still out side after 9pm! :) :) Thanx for stopping in on this one, Helen -- as always, I so enjoyed your comments! ;);) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from Lordinajamjar
How beautiful is this? Simply gorgeous. I love it!
A wonderful poem. I wish I had more than six stars to give but I am only mortal.
All the best.
John
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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How beautiful is this? Simply gorgeous. I love it!
A wonderful poem. I wish I had more than six stars to give but I am only mortal.
All the best.
John
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Well, I am certainly glad that you are mortal and can award such beauty, John -- you just put a big smile on my face on a Wednesday...so, that's saying something......Hmmmmm, maybe it's mortal with super-powers! ;) ;) I 'm so glad you enjoyed my poem, sir -- you be sure to have a wonderful remainder of the week! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
Hmm, I never thought about it that way, Yvette. Midnight when the past meets the future weeps a little while and smiles, grows older as time takes wing. This is a good entry for the Cinquain Poetry contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Hmm, I never thought about it that way, Yvette. Midnight when the past meets the future weeps a little while and smiles, grows older as time takes wing. This is a good entry for the Cinquain Poetry contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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You got it, Jose -- so glad you enjoyed this 'cuz I had fun with it...you know with the whole blurring the lines between fantasy and reality...LOL! :) ;) Crazy blonde woman! :) Take care and have a great remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
